Perfect. The "good" lord vader and the dark side in anakin only symbolize more and more, how much he ist he Chosen one. The balance of dark and bright side of the force. Pure genius

When comparing this birthday to Mara's in the previous story, I kind of feel that Anakin prefers Mara, purely because of that spanking, as I think that was unjust and humiliating. I admit, if that happened to me, I would have gone dark side, and killed them.
A bit to much pranking and consequent spankings for me. However, this is a very good series, and well written.

Somehow I predicted this would happen, this being A'Marie being sold into the slave market after running off somewhere.
Anyway, I have to say I am loving this series, especially the amount of detail you've written and the excellent plot points.

I loved your story. I really wish you would continue. This is the best Star Wars fanfiction I have ever read.

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piett huh shouldnt he be 30 since he is older than Luke

Boba Fett must not have been paying attention to the news at all; if he had, he would have known that kidnapping a Jedi is a bad idea- even more so when said Jedi is the daughter of the most powerful Jedi ever.

Boba Fett and his accomplice are DEAD; the rest is merely minor details.

Allow me to help you with that:

Anakin should really go into acting if he ever retires; he makes a surprisingly good Sith Lord.

more plageus

can i borrow the good anakin bad anakin 2 personalitys i picture the guy somtimes like the hulk in the original cartoons the incredible hulk and she hulk there were 2 hulks fighting fro control i picture anakin and vader

Star wars should be more like this not like old republic games

Wow! Amazing story - like always! Loved the characterisation and everything about it.

Good job, update soon!

This chapter was really epic! I absolutely LOVED when Anakin had to use a mind trick on A'Marie. It was really amazing and he even felt bad about it. It really showed what an amazing father he is!

I certainly hope you will do more with this story... I read it the first time you posted it and loved it. All three stories in this trilogy are on my favorites list, and I would like to see more of this family! This chapter was all right for an ending, but all in all I felt the story was incomplete, and I hope that you may find some way to add to it and make the story feel concluded! Besides, I adore A'Marie and would like to hear more of her pranks! ;)