That was excellent. A lovely little "slice of life" on Atlantis. Loved it. Very well written and your characterisation is excellent. Thanks.

I liked this fic...it really elaborated on the team dynamic and the trust that runs between John and Teyla...

I think the highlight for me was the fact that Teyla took the lead and got her and John out of trouble and back to the jumper.

Great story!

I am a John/Teyla shipper but first and formost Teyla is my favorite character so stories such as this that really brings home the idea of Teyla as the leader, tracker and teammate are my favorites...

...but the focus on John and Teyla interaction is always a plus.

hmm, that's an intriguing idea. ESP is always cool. :)

Very poetic.

Brilliantly written! The dynamic was good and it flowed really well. I could picture every part happening as I read it. Well done!

Apparently not, nice story.