Please don't stop here - it's a bad habit :)

Well, so far I am LOVING this fic! The opening scene with Mark is just so . . . Mark-ish, and explains the complicated thinking of him so well!

These particular lines stuck with me, and are really just incredible, real, and so very well-written.

"The only way to heal was to forget and the only way to recover was to ignore." -so in character for Mark!

Also, "With all this perfection came an irregular amount of dissatisfaction." What a beautiful line!

gahh! how can you write something like this and not go on? your work is amazing. your characters match those of Jonathan Larson perfectly. please just don’t drop this story ~and while were on the subject PLZ DONT DROP ANY OF YOUR STORIES!

I think this actually makes a really good end. It's not final... its a cliffhanger, but it's not, because you know what the paper says. You pretty much know what happens afterward... This was a great read! Keep writing. I love your RENTfics!

Your a wonderful writer.

Please write more

Let me just tell you.

Wow.

That was probably the most original RENT fic I've ever read. I mean, amazing. You really cut down the timeline a lot, which was a really neat idea and I never thought of doing that before.

The characterization was amazing. Your writing style was amazing.

I'm definitely putting this baby on my rec list. :)

Your writing style is somehow very poetic :) Almost as if the fic is a continous poem throughout.

I hope you update soon! I'm very interested as to how things will turn out.

Finish, por favor?

That's amazing. As long as you don't kill angel, this story is beyond perfection so far. You've captured just enough angst, and drama, with an honest amount of smut.

Amazing.

Please update soon.

oh dollface. excellent 2 chapters. you killed me. dead. you did.

i tell you all the time. but you're fabulous.

omgz love love love.

Oh, wow. That's an idea that I personally favor but rarely see: Mark actually /not/ being the one to discover April. Excellent two chapters!

Oh. Love this.

I have no idea how to react to the last 2 chapters, seeing as how I forgot if they have had explicit sex yet, or what happened in chapter 9. *shrugs* Don't got time to read it over. Lunch is almost over. Anyways, please clarify this for me, or I'll just put it off and keep bugging you. See ya!

Wow, these chapters were really great, really fresh, very enjoyable to read. Especially the last couple of lines - about April's death and Mark finally coming and Roger... it was all really great. :)

I always love your writing, and this is no exception. I just love how different the writing style is, and how raw it seems. You just tell the truth, and that makes it wonderful. I don't really have much else to say. I'm still in a daze from reading this all in one day, but yes. I love it and I can't wait until the next chapter.