Lovely

Very nice.

I think you got Tuon perfectly xD

Wish it continued... I was equally distraught with you leaving Ebony Doll... :(.

Outstanding little piece. Only one critiscism. The cussing.

Mat should not be saying bloody hell, rather Blood and bloody ashes or something to the effect. The two instances are,

"“Where is Selucia and what the bloody hell do you want?”"

A small change to WoTize it would be,

"“Where is Selucia and what do you bloody well want?”"

Other instance,

"“Bloody hell, Tuon!” he said, brows furrowed at her, ignoring the proffered handkerchief."

Another very small change.

"“Blood and bloody ashes, Tuon!” he said, brows furrowed at her, ignoring the proffered handkerchief."

That's all. Other than these two instances I was impressed by everything. Mat and Tuon are definitely one of my favorite couples no matter how much I despise the Seanchan.

nice

Hey, I like it! Romance between Mat and Tuon isn’t normal, but the fact that she’d admit to feeling anything while kissing him is romance enough for me. I mean, her whole life has always emphasized on feeling no emotion.

...well, I should actually be studying histology right now, but hey, noone's perfect...

I really enjoyed this. Tuon/Mat is my favourite Wheel pairing, and this was right on the spot. Tuon's voice is well captured.

Good job.

This is a great oneshot! (it could be a great start too...) I like that you really had Tuon in-character, it bothers me when stories have her acting too girlish and sweet,in love, ect. Good job!

great job. certainly authentic-sounding and completely adorable.

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Very authentic Tuon PoV.

Her observations of Mat are spot-on, and you've done a good job with that Cauthon fellow himself (especially the messy handwriting and his tendency to nibble pens!).

Really enjoyed this piece - hope to see more.

*pumps fist in the air* Yes!

You always seem to write the stories I want told, and do a marvelous job with them. :) I really think you got Tuon's voice down perfectly, and of course I have no qualms at all about the quality of the romance- very believeable, especially her curious analysis during the kiss. I loved the ale-Toy comparison too.

I love your work. I like your interpretation. Great job.

Oh, I love this! And you say this is not romantic, but I still blushed when they kissed. And Tuon is not the most romantic person anyway. I love her thoughts on Mat and how she compared him the the Seanchan general. And how he is all rumpled and his writing is nothing but a scrawl - way below her station. And how she is use to the nobilty of the Seanchan and Mat is the opposite of it and she still finds him interesting.