Reviews for Asylum Aftermath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent characterizations and an oh so needed missing moment post-Asylum. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dean just won't stay mad when Sam needs him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "It was so much harder to hold on to the raw hurt inside him when confronted so glaringly with Sam's. He had never been able to let Sammy suffer, and since there wasn't room enough inside him for both of their pain, he let his go." I am in love with those lines they're so perfectly Dean as if you opened up his head and looked around. Excellant characterization Thnx for the read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "You're my brother, and I'd die for you." It was the Winchester version of "I love you." It sure is Well, I liked that DD See you around ~ Rosetta |
![]() ![]() ![]() A beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep, it is the Winchester version of I love you. You hit it. You write often in short sentences. I do, too. I like that way of writing,it works often. You do a nice spin on it. When you're talking about Mary, you use the word Before and capitalized the "B". I think this was intentional. I like that, too. I do that with Evil and Good. This was lovely. Really liked Dean's anguish and how his brother had to hate him and then only to realize - giving him the gun might have been a bad idea. He really does love me afterall. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And just like that I'm in love with the story.. ) |
![]() ![]() loved loved loved it. god you just have such a way of writing the brothers pain and emotions that is so true to who they are. its awesome. thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story. Asylum stories are one of my favorites. I like just about any of the missing scenes stories. The line that i like the best is this one. So like Dean smart ass. "Next time I won’t offer him the gun though. Bad idea." And this line sums up their whole life together in the way of where one starts the other ends "They had gone into each fight shoulder to shoulder, each filling in where the other left off." And of course who could forget the Winchester version of I love you "You’re my brother, and I’d die for you." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love this missing scene ... the show needed it so badly. Great job really like how you had dean all tough and pissed off then we watched him melt into the big brother we know and love. good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! Finally got to read this with understanding of the events :D Very well written, I could easily see Sam guilt, Dean's pain etc. A moving moment that tugs at anyone's heartstrings :) Excellent job. ... And you were right, Asylum was an ACE episode. Looking forward to next weeks! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow! perfect ending! You know, when i saw that episode, i nearly cried when Sam pulled the trigger...and then pulled it again...and AGAIN! Wonderful take on the aftermath. Loved it! |
![]() ![]() I love that last line. Really good story. It was awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great fic! |