That was majorly depressing. But well written! Gah.

so sad... but really beautiful, specially the last part

*Gasp*

O the tears run freely down my cheeks. It all just ended so soon, such a pure love. I seriously hope you write more soon. Your next characters name should be hm...Amanda and marry Tristana nd have lots and lots of babies.

On a more serious note this has been one of the better KA fan fictions. You did a great job

What a sad, yet so beautiful ending ... keeps on crying till my eyes are puffy and swollen and red... then sulks some.. then goes back to crying..

Aw... cute! Loved it, though I thought it could be longer. It's great this way too. Great work, my dear!

~Priestess

Oh my gosh, I have chills and tears in my eyes. *cries* You've done a fantastic job with this my friend, truly fantastic!

I really don't even know what to say, I'm kind of speechless at the moment. Seeing or reading any of the Knight's death always gets to me. .but Tristan's. . with his hawk circling above. . *sighs*

You really did do an excellent job on this. . short but sweet. . and very well written.

I thank you for such a lovely piece of work. . .and I look forward to more of your new fic as well. I have started reading it and love it too. . I can't remember now if I reviewed that one or not. .*looks thoughtful* Ah well, I'll go check, lol.

Take care, and happy writing!

MWP

:D

Interesting story so far.

I wonder what's going to happen.

ooh tristrans pissed off he he he i'd hate to be a roman in a dark alley and meeting up with him after what just happened... hope you update soon!

Great chapter my dear! Despite what you may think of it, I quite enjoyed it!

I loved the little moment between Tristan and Kele before the ice battle, very sweet!

I'm sorry to hear you are suffering from writer's block, that is no fun at all! I hope it clears soon, as I look forward to updates on both this and ALSL!

Anyway, gotta go, on my lunchbreak! *grins* Keep up the fantastic work and take care!

MWP

:D

wonderful chapter! i especially liked the last paragraph, where Tristan is talking about his home. beautiful wording!

aw don't leave tristan :( lol. awesome story/chap update plz

Aww... Tristran/Kele interaction is still cute. I love it. Of course it's not bad! Update soon. Good luck, by the way, with the writer's block. Hope you can overcome it. Toodles.

~Priestess

I love this story...

I hope that you update soon, Its rare to find an author who can truly keep Tristan in character. Oh how sexy that character is...Lol Update soon pwease

Absolutely terrific. I really am enjoying this. I wait patiently for an update.

this really is fantastic! i loved the conversation between them.

please update fast!