Reviews for All That Heaven Allows Series
The Imitation Wizard chapter 12 . 9/20/2019
Bloody fantastic story! I was hooked from the beginning and couldn’t let go until the end! Truly amazing writing! Thank you for this masterpiece! Bravo!
Brokenblackrose89 chapter 12 . 3/19/2019
Very interesting concept
brendafay chapter 12 . 8/6/2017
love it
2kooll4u chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
That's it. I quit. I will check back to see if you have removed all that muck ... I can't read...it's just to distracting. If not, then i'll just have to remove you from my favorite artist list.

Damn woman! You can write. You don't need to drip all those cutie passages throughout your work. Turn lose of those crutches and write woman.

Good concept, disjointed execution.
2kooll4u chapter 3 . 3/5/2014
I like your stories, I like your concepts. I hate that you keep putting bits and pieces of poems? songs? musings? whatever in the middle of the stories. It does not add to my enjoyment. It simply pulls me out of the story and I have to consciously work to get back in, only to be pulled out by another piece of useless prose that does not move the story forward.

Is there any way to put this sh... stuff at the end of the chapter. Some people might enjoy it. Hell, I might even enjoy it, if it wasn't wanking my thoughts around.
spike'smate chapter 3 . 10/14/2013
looking good although they still dont know why they there
spike'smate chapter 2 . 10/14/2013
getting exciting what with being injected. But yr spelling needs checking
spike'smate chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
oh no buffy's in trouble
MilleniumRing chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Hi, just one quick bit of input for you - Spike is not over 200 years old, he's just over 100 as he was turned in the 1880's and the Buffyverse is in the 1990's and early 2000's. Apart from that, I can't find much of anything wrong. It's a lovely idea so far :D
spike'smate chapter 12 . 12/11/2010
really good story, but your spelling needs checking thank you
cat chapter 3 . 1/5/2006
i like your story so far

just one note having as many song verse in your story as you do really interupts the flow of the story

it would work a lot better if you just had one verse at the beging of each chapter.

but over all i like the shape of your story
Son Of Evil chapter 12 . 1/16/2003
That is one of the best storys I have EVER read! I've got it on favorites.
dolally chapter 12 . 5/1/2002
Loved this.

I have a huge soft-spot of season 4ish S/B stories and so this made me very happy. :)

Excellent plot and full of lovely moments.

Great, beautiful stuff.
OlgaB chapter 12 . 4/27/2002
I loved this story! The characterizations were great, the plot was intriguing, the music was wonderful, and the ending was... fantastic. Classic ;-) Have you tried that on your boyfriend? ;-)
Sibylla chapter 6 . 3/17/2002
I'm on ch 6 now and I'm telling ya, the Council better get their asses kicked before this is over!

Great story, you've really got me hooked!
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