gohan hissing at his girlfriend did i read right your dad was the one who put the crazy idea of his daughter my girlfriend fight masked men with guns everyday videl hissing saying to her boyfriend relax calm down if my dad didn't get me my Jon as crime stopper then i would not have met my son gohan

Short, but fitting as their really was not much about Videl to start with. But she is important to that world and seeing a few things from her perspective and how her world slowly but surely changed? I liked it.

I love all of this. You really managed to capture Videl's essence. I could easily imagine Videl thinking like this.
Also, these two are my favorites lines
"not when it involved settling down with a super-powered alien who treated death like a revolving door" That is a extremely accurate and funny description of the saiyans
"Fortunately, 'girl calmly, happily marries high-school sweetheart' was a story not even Mr. Satan's daughter could turn into a media event" Is just so funny to me, even when I can't explain why

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good job

love it :) That was beautifully written :)

I enjoyed reading this!

This was actually the first piece of fanfiction I ever read when I was like, fourteen or fifteen or something, and it was what got me into fanfiction...and via fanfiction, writing myself. I saw it again and re-read it, and it is still quite excellent. I like the wry humor and how Videl's perspective was portrayed. It was very well done.

Great fic

Ah, this was lovely. You just about summed up Videl's life. Really impressive. My favourite line had to be that last one, where it mentioned 'the REAL daughter-of-the-man-who-saved-the-world'. :)

sora

This story is beautiful well written and pretty freaking awesome! I thank her for recommending and linking it on her DA.

This is such a wonderful, humorous look at Videl's life. I love it!

Really Great, nothing much to say and cute ending mentioning Pan :D

Wow...just amazing. This is an incredibly well written piece of literature. Even though it didn't really have any romance in it which I originally thought it would I still think it's amazing. You have an amazing talent as a writer.

Love it. Actually, I found this story from your sister's art on deviant art. But I found it to be very good.