this is a pretty good chapter but you may or may not of realized you called the wolf fellow Derian lupine and vixen which are both terms for foxes and vixen is actually a term for a female

I wondered who that was. Will the gang find out?

sweet intro

O joyful, O delighted,O fortunate one!
Weep no more, this departed son.
Read these words, sound thy voice.
Revel and sing! Rejoice! Rejoice!
Life's for the living, not the dead.
Forget tomorrow, live now instead.
This night you breathe, while they cannot.
So dance ye soul on their resting spot.

Hallo Freund Ich bin hier con confratulate Sie auf Ihrem deutschen, Und ich finde komisch, dass Uma diesen Betrag an Energie hat, weil ihr ein bisschen zu viel.
PS: Hier ist eine japanische excersice der Samurai, wenn Sie in einer stummen Weg excersice möchten. Strecken Sie Ihre Arme und versuchen, sie so gerade wie möglich... Hier kommen die harte Teil, bereit? Okay, ragen halten die Arme in dieser Position für 5 Minuten, wenn die doppelte Zeit acomplished und so weiter.

Jerry hates mr. Zuikawa for making poor Keiko to marry. Jerry finds that a inhuman act to do for the parents can't force love but they can force marriage; that's a reason that Jerry doesn't believe in marriage for it was marriage that hurt Jerry's childhood by separating papa and mama so is hall not marry and have kids but I shall adopt a boy and girl to teach them by myself; Jerry finds school useless for sometimes investigations or researches aren't deep and Jerry is very good at researching so I shall be the only professor of my adoptive children and I shall not be thr best parent nor the worst for that is up to them to decide but my actions will be pure of intention and shall punish bad behavior for I don't tolerate bad behavior not even if it is excusable for violence leads only to violence but love leads only to the nourishment of thr heart and mind. Don't you agree on that part Kitty?
PS: would you accept OC proposal from moi?

Jerry noticed Kitty has trouble with Spanish; for instance in Spanish you never say "vaminos" you actually say "vamonos" if you have trouble with Spanish or VERY specific data please tell Jerry and Jerry shall help. After all Kitty's story is good, very good and impressively satisfying to read if I May say so but it's still not as good as it should be since I noticed some spelling mistakes but only in Spanish (good job on the over languages like German for Svetlana and Maria) but still the problem withi Spanish persists; please mon cher (I tell most gals/ladies/girls I meet on this web page) tell or get assistance when you don't know or aren't very sure if you don't know how to spell a word.
PS: good job on the "Guardian angel" thing, but if Jerry suggests for knocking someone down why not use toxin for periferic nervous system that just down mobility on nerves of extremities but not nerves of organs like heart and lungs for example.

Chapter is funny for how Keiko acted when praised but frowns when family mentioned; Japanese people most times put tradition and honour before and after family and apparently Keikos family isn't very different. Favourite author of Italy said (when he was alive) "The real definition of agony and pain is when in times of war you remember times of peace" which is true. What does Kitty think of saying from Italian author?

Jerry finds romance touching but Jerry doesn't believe in love very much for Jerry has been hurt many times by love and now h just believes that love hurts like a son of a gun sometimes but it's worth every single ounce of pain people go through when they love each other; if that's not he case. Ignore the person for either you love them or they love you but it isn't a shared emotion so one will get hurt. Jerry has friend and friend beats boyfriends for fathers fault since her father beated her mother and she saw that and she grew to hate men but not Jerry for Jerry always loyal to people who suffer since Jerry knows a lot of suffering... more than Jerry would like. When someone loves someone else and the emotion is on both sides then its worth every single drop of tears, blood and pain for that is what love is; a road of both agony and ecstasy, hate and joy but is up to the driver how he sees the road.
PS: tell Jerry what do you think of what love is in your perspective if you don't mind Jerry knowing that is.

Situation of Kitty reminds Jerry of story, old story of mythology if Jerry isn't mistaking; Scylla and Charybdis of th odyssey of Homer; Jerry was in similar situation of Kitty in past life when he insulted a dear friend and Jerry paid with whole year if solitude until Jerry went bonkers and started to wonder mentally speaking of fantasies and that type of mumbo jumbo stuff; Jerry did apologize and Jerry made new friends on Internet and real life so Jerry is happy.
PS: do you want to be friends with Jerry?

Jerry shall teach Kitty how to spell loved one properly in Spanish since Jerry is bothered by that since 1 part of treequel.
It isn't spelled querera its actually spelled "querida" or "mi amada" querera according to the royal spaniard academy or RAE querera isn't a word at all so Jerry help Kitty with tiny mistake.
PS: you can thank Jerry later

Jerry finds this chapter funny for Kitty make problem of "matchmaking" per se seem to be funny in how Jerry imagines facial expressions of all the pretty girls in scenes.
PS: Jerry would like to do proposal; PM if interested

Jerry suggests that Kitty make story where Cooper and company hear a rumor of "el corazon" being somewhere in Cartagena by a mysterious character (could be anyone but Jerry would like to appear in story) and it has a value of 37 million dollars (due to its gigantic size) and Thr benefactor of the info woul take the jewel in exchange of... particular services and influences in the criminal world per se?
PS: the "el corazon" is from Romancing the Stone if it doesn't ring any bells and you could make that story thr 1 international and life threatening heist for Carmelita since other people will be in search of the "corazon" like they because the told them expanded the rumor to others for... money, favours and the like

Jerry finds this chapter predictable... very predictable for the way it was made... Jerry not saying Jerry didn't like but it could be much better if you do more leg work Kitty.
PS: good work anyway... jerry is happy for story and Kitty herself

Jerry finds situation at C'est Sing funny in many reasons.
The facial expression of Maria and Svetlana when they were notified that Arkaday and Ludmilla where in C'est Sing for clothing (it is funny yet not at the same time right?) and what are Naomi and Yuri will say when they "confront Arkaday and Ludmilla inside of ye shop would be funny in Jerry's mind yet it isn't a reason to take lightly right?
PS: Jerry is happy with story... Jerry hopes that Kitty make more good stories for Jerry to read for now I bid you adieu Kitty and good luck (not that you need it)