Can you at least do research before writing things? This would have been good if not for the fact that you got a lot of names wrong and concepts like the summoning jutsu, ex. The whole point of a summoning contract is the the weilder has to sign a contract, not just get a seal placed on them. It makes no sense that you say a mankey placed a seal on his shoulder so he has the contract. Its pure laziness, i don't understand how you have tine to write 50 chapters and it be this bad, if you have time to write that much then you have time to make sure each chapter is as good as it can be before posting

Good story i really liked it the plot was good and the pairings were good I also liked how limited you kept the character bashing in the story I liked the level of power Naruto possessed and all in all I felt that you did a fine job writing this story.

Hey!
So, yea. You are an amazing writer! I'm definitely hooked on this story, and I'm barely in. But I saw the list of pairings. I hate Naruto being paired with anyone but Hinata! So, could you let me know if this is NaruHina? I tried looking through the reviews, but I couldn't find one that said.
And trust me, you are very good at writing! I just don't want to read such a long story, only to find out that it isn't NaruHina, you know?
Either way, keep up the good work! And please let me know :)

haha omg my NAME IS AMNA SO CLOSE TO EMNA OMG HAHAHAHAHHA :)

alsome thats all i have to say and good day (epic happy face)

good beggining

I have been searching for HOURS (and I am not exagerating, I am being literal) for the meanings behind the wors that you are using for your attacks. I have found almost nothing. (with the exception of arashi, kitei, and asshuku) I have been forced to come to four conclusionns. 1) You are making up words that seem to be japanese and using them 2) You are mixing kanji that I can't find to create words that don't exist making it nearly impossible to translate them 3) You have a better translator than any I can find inwhich case I would like to know it, or 4) you aren't using japanese words. Please tell me what your attack mean: sabi non, saheme, and any other attack in your story. Also in the future, if you are going to use foreign words either translate them in brackets next to the words themselves or make a list of the translated words at the bottom of the page. Thank you and have a nice day. (P.S. I had to try very hard to force myself to be polite because I understand how irritating flames are to writters, but I want you to know that I. AM. PISSED. I have wasted hours trying to translate words that I am even entirely sure exist and I have been on this chapter for way too long because I am having so much trouble understanding the attack. In case it isn't obvious, yes I am OCD when it comes to sh*t like this. So I would very much appreciate some form of response, preferrably soon.)

Thank you for making this SUPER au. it keeps me guessing.

-.-' I'm tempted to stop reading this story right now. Why'd you post it as Naru/Hina if ur gonna pair him with EVERY FEMALE HE MEETS!

I hate harem.

Holy shit! ROFL! That part with the crystal ball was the funniest thing I have ever read! You sir...are a GENIUS!

harem with haku,hinata,ayame,and tayuya as members

naru/harem

Atually i think her name is Hanabi...

Not that it's that important, though...

I feel bad for Anko...

she was nice and cool.

I'm also glad you managed to fit in the Uchiha massacre so well with all that ;)

I will probably continue reading for some time, and then forget about the story when I have one chapter to read until I finish...

the monkey kings name is Enma you dumbass get it right