Yes, it was sad. Well-written, but sad, like you intended it to be.

Have I told you that you're awesome? Well you are. YOu are so awesome that the stars would fall if you asked them to, and fans would bow and grovel at your feet. I'm not too sure avout the stars thing, you'd have to test that one... I like how you took situations from your life and applied them to stories, because that makes them all the more real. like your line "No, and I haven't been for a long time." because you actually said it, and now it's in your story. which is a kick ass story by the way. okay, I have to go now. bye bye.

-Autum

I loved how you tied your inner emotions to her and gave the story a more-to-life feeling.

Good work.

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This was a great, great, GREAT STORY! WHOOP!

*cheers*

Well, actually I'm listening to Back Home from Yellowcard. Hee. Just thought you'd like to know.

I liked this story a LOT. The whole living in the moment but you don't know it then really hit home with me (It made me think about Cale again, and weirdly, my English class).

Keep writing girlie. You rock already, and you can only get better.

-animeobsessed3191

Very good. Keep it up! _

OH god, that's so sad and...well...kinda sweet. Love BB/Rae 4eva!