good story

Good story, I was a little upset the way the movie ended and I'm glad you wrote these two stories about their life afterwards. I'm happy Ashitaka, San, and Moro lived. Very well done. TJ2 out!

I am glad to say i enjoyed this series very much. It was very well written and it took on a point of view from after they became parents (i haven't found much of those in the format of a couple chapters only one page talking about how much they love their daughter, but you managed to create a story out of it.) not only that but you took the time to do your research on the plot line. Keep it up and you will be writing your own novels in no time at all.

YOURS TRULY: ComonDayCritic

Excellent. Very well written.

The one thing I found interesting (for better or worse) was the way San and Ashitaka are always refering to each other as 'love'.

WOW! I think that after reading both of these fics they should magically be turned into full fledged movies! You have a wonderful talent for detail and drama. Both of your two fics took the wonderful characters of Ashitaka and San and took them to new heights and I applaude you for that. Not only did you take a wonderful pair and turn them into such a model and wonderfully loving couple (that I would read about for ages to come) but you created some very unique and interesting characters of your own. I suppose i could continue with praise saying how much I enjoyed both of these stories or I could sum it all up by tiping my hat SO! *tips hat* well done.

Great Fanfic. This one, with Waking Up should be the aftermath of Princess Monoke...I know you want to kill me of the spelling. I love the anime, but have trouble with names. A/110%. ( Sorry if everything backwards) Gotta go!

-Sky66

That was as awesome as Waking Up!Surprisingly I wasnt really irratated by the lemon part.(Maybe because I read so many lemons that I got used to reading them)I wonder if San and Ashitaka will have more children?You should make another sequel.

I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! I knew it was her! I just had this feeling that it was Kaya! Why, I don't know. Hahaha! Yes!

Excellent, excellent sequel! I hope you decide to continue adding to this at some time in the future!

That was an interesting bit of information in the author's note at the end concerning the true relationship between Kaya and Ashitaka. It's also one of the reasons I prefer subtitled over dubbed versions. I've noticed the subtitles tend to be a more accurate translation of the original dialogue than a dub, and many times I've discovered subtle plot elements that way that are completely skipped over in a dubbed version. Great story, by the way!

I really like it keep going!

very good story. although i'm always hoping for the whole forest spirit to come back and make everything better thing, this is really good. the whole thing about kaya not really being ashitaka's little sister, i never knew. thanks for the insight. keep authoring:)

Awsome. This was really good. You should make a sequel to this sequel. This was really awsome.

OH MY GOD!

*Cries*

This is the best fan fic I have ever read!

It made me cry! Lol!

please write more!

I don't know what else to say, it was so awesome!

I'm speachless!

I LOVED THE FAN FIC SO MUCH! _

Its the best fan fic ever, it should be Princess Mononoke part 2! It really should be!

your a great and talented writer!

Hello.
Well, I have to say this is the first half-decent Princess Mononoke fic I've been able to find. A few complaints, however;
A;though I liked how you did Kaya - I saw the mistake in the English version as well - I must admit the '...' around the little sister got got quite annoying after a while.
I think you should take out the lemon. It could have easily been erased and made little difference to the plot, and many people don't like reading those much. That would get rid of the 'R' rating, and thus make the fic accessible to more people.
It would be nice if you went through and added more details. Everything else was wonderful; the action sequences, the dialogue, everything, but some things should have been done in a little more detail.
A few lines were OOC, like San's 'Oh my god' and Ashitaka's 'Shutup'. Those probably could be changed, like San's 'oh my god' to 'Forest Spirit' or something.
In any case, this was an excellent story, and I hope to read more like this.
Namárië,
*~Nallasariel the Weeper