Reviews for Moving On
I-ZulaikhaZ chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
How Odd tell Sissi his feeling is...wow. He just said it like it was nothing. Love it!
Eternal Love Song chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Again, fun. Odd and Sissi are fun;cute;funny. I like you're stories.(should have read them in order though) This was a good story.
AngelBolt chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Ehh, I think you should've just added another chapter onto your old one,

Other than that, wonderful!
1stRainbowRose chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
I think you're great... and you need to continue... (I bugg you for this too much, but you can actually write, and have decent plots and junk.) Please do a full story? With the basic couples... PLEASE?
midnight972 chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
whe i love it.

-kelsey
todd fan chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Murphy's Law flourishes

Doesn't it always? ;)

"Your sarcasm makes me feel young again,"

This amused me somehow

Okay, that's it, I'm watching this show tomorrow, damnit, I'll have to take over the TV.
Neko K chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Love it
The Old Rycr chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
This story is pretty good! Keep up the good work and keep writing. You write funny/angsty stuff pretty well!

Awesome job. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
Vergilia chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Hee... nice. Sissi always will be a little in love with Ulrich, just like every person never really falls out of love with their first crush.

I hope that sentence made sense, because I'm reading over it, and I don't think it did. Oh well.

Anyway, excellent job, excellent characterizations, no truly noticeable errors, and yay for 'keeping the faith'.

Tschüs!

Mirie
ReddistheRose chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Brilliant! I read both stories and loved them both. It's somtimes hard to make the transition from SU to SO- you did it perfectly. I could picture every movement of Odd's, haha!
1132942 chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Oh my God. You are amazing.

Your potrayal of Odd as an adult is perfect. It's hard to believe I'm reading fan stuff, not actual Antescoop literature. I've seen this quality of fanfic once before.

Beautiful. Just beautiful. I think you've made me an OxS shipper and I don't give up those things easily (I had been a UxS and JxY). I told you when I reviewed Replacement that keep this up and I'd be your fan, now you've held up your and I hold up mine.
A Delusional Person chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Replacement definitely needed a sequel...and I'm glad you gave it one.

It was most defintely good.

All of your CL stories are 133t. Keep on writing.
Dragon C. Chan chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
I luv it! [hugs the fict] -
Stonecreek chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Just because I commented at LF doesn't mean I can't here! I like the characterizations here best, I think. They seem more mature, but easily slip back into their sereis-era personas quite easily, which is fine. I've long supported OxS, and this blossoming set of stories is moving up my fav's list.
Cold-Foxx chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
That was great I believe the American joke was very grand with the fic, especially with Odd saying it. Great job