Ack! I hope you haven't forgotten this story, I'm looking forward to this one, even though I'm like 4 months late since your last update. Anyway, I love the thought of a grown-up Lucan.

Excellent chapter my dear! I loved it! Such beautiful imagery of the fort in the rain. . .I could just picture it, it was wonderful!

And the interaction between Lucan and Sienna was fabulous. Poor Lucan being forced to ride an old old nag, hehe. I've been there, stuck with an old beast that doesn't want to move no matter what you do, while everyone else is having a blast, so I felt his pain, lol. *grins*

Well, fantastic job yet again my friend, I cannot wait for the next chapter! Take care!

MWP

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i loved this chapter, it was beautifully written! especially the spoilt princess part.

anyway, i wait for the next chapter.

Fabulous chapter my dear! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to review, you know how RL can be. *grins sheepishly*

Anyway, I loved this update! Brietta and Sienna are truly lovely characters, and I love Brietta's infatuation with Drystan! So very adorable!

Hehe, Lucan has quite the temper on him doesn't he? He seems quite the handfull, lol.

Ah well, it's off to bed for me. . my brain is exhausted from finally finishing my own chapter, hehe. So sorry this review was not very long, I did very much enjoy the chapter though and cannot wait for more! Lots of love. . .

MWP

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wonderful chapter. Lucan's a bit arrogant, but nice all the same ;)

can't wait for more! please update fast.

Wow. I love Lucan. He's arrogant and an arse, but still, I love him (; Can I steal him and keep him? It's going to be interesting seeing how Arthur handles him - Lucan doesn't seem to like authority, and he doesn't seem to like Sienna particuarly either. It's like Romeo and Juliet only...less speeches about drug-taking fairies *laughs* Can't wait for the next part!

See you soon - in about an hour actually!

Chiara x

not a romatic fan realy but this has charm. whant to know more.

i love it! this is really excellent and a great chapter. please update as fast as you can!

I really like this story. The thought of Lucan being a bad boy and Arthur trying to straighten him out is awesome. Seems to really fit with what might have happened after the movie. GReat job! Loving it so far! Update soon!

JessipurrMalfoy

Wow! Fabulous chapter my dear! I LOVED it! And I am completely in love with this story already as well! Sorry it's taken me so long to review. . you know how crazy RL can be at times!

I absolutely adore Lucan, he is a wonderful character and you are doing a fantastic job with him! I feel so bad for the poor guy, growing up the way he did, no friends and such. *hugs him* I do so hope he will allow Drystan into his life, he REALLY needs a friend!

And then there's Albion, I HATE bullies! *growls and reaches for my axe* I LOVED seeing Lucan kick his sorry butt halfway into next week, hehe. That entire scene was wonderful!

I'm so glad Arthur forgave him, and you are doing a great job with Arthur's character as well. I can just feel his torment, sadness and worry. It would be very difficult for him to be back in the place where he both lost and gained so much, after so many years. I certainly would not want his position as King, nor Guin's as Queen.

Ah well, I know there was more I wanted to comment on that I thought of as I was reading, but it's all left my head now. If I do remember, I'll tell you later, hehe. I really must go now though, so I will just say. . I LOVE THIS! I cannot wait for the next update!

WoW!

I LOVE this so far, I really do. Lucan's character is great - and don't they say every girl loves a bad boy?

I think I've figured out somethings that are going to happen but it looks like it could be a long road to them, and I can't wait!

Keep up the great work

H

Oh I LOVE THIS! It's fabulous my dear. . simply fabulous!

I love absolutely everything about it, from the very first line on you had me hooked!

I've been very excited waiting for this and you most definately did not dissapoint! I love how you've written Lucan, and Drystan seems like a nice sort as well, hopefully poor Lucan will have a friend at last!

Oh, I cannot wait to see what happens next! You've done a truly fantastic job with this my friend!

MWP

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very good so far! i really like this. i never really thought about what Lucan would grow up to be like, but you've described him excellently.

Anyway, already i love this, please update fast!

I love you for posting this. And I know what's going to happen *fangirly squeals* That is, unless the plot's changed radically. And if it has, I demand to be told. We've been friends for eleven years, is that so much to ask? *hugs*

Lots of love, Chiara x