| Reviews for The Unseemly Proposal |
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Dirtydiana.269 chapter 27 . 6/19 Hey scarlet-sparx . I really love the story and hope u can finish it . I wanna know if Hermione does say yes . |
Noelle chapter 27 . 8/30/2019 I think your story was grand I liked it vary much but I must wonder what about the love knot do they get married or do they just keep being stuck and do they ever get the book to get rid of the love knot. I’m sorry for asking all these questions but I can’t help but wonder. |
NotafanofOOC chapter 19 . 6/19/2019 I’ve heard wonderful reviews about this so when I started reading I was massively disappointed by how OOC Hermione is. Pansy slapping her hard enough to leave a hand print without Hermione retaliating. Hermione getting on a broom with Draco so he can practice. Draco seems to always have his way and Hermione doesn’t even try to negotiate with him or fight back. She could have knowing how much he loves quidditch. It’s extreme and you seem to promote Hermione getting abused without her fighting back. You made her into a masochist. Where is her self respect? Where is our Hermione that set Snape on fire? Stole potion ingredients from Snape to illegally brew a potion in the girls bathroom? Hexed the sign-up sheet that caused Marietta Edgecombe’s face to be scarred “sneak”? Lured Umbridge to the centaurs and obliviated her parents and sent them away? Where is this amazing woman? It seems like you’ve sacrificed Hermione’s character for Draco’s benefit. I will continue to read the next chapters hoping that at some point she would wake up and demand her rights. This is a highly recommended fic, so far I do not think it is to my liking. I am sorry I f it is still the case even as I reach the last few chapters. |
drucindastorm chapter 27 . 4/24/2019 I know it's been so long almost more than a decade but I really hope that you update or just give it just end it completely like jump to epilogue like the next chapter i am really dying for the happy ending and forever after by the way this lovely |
Heather Dyson chapter 27 . 4/8/2019 I'm wondering if this has any more coming? I would love to see how it ends:-) |
eschnipke chapter 27 . 2/2/2019 I really liked your story! I hope you continue it someday. I love the steadiness of the slowburn and Lucius may be OOC, but he’s funny. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2019 Please continue the chapters |
Guest chapter 27 . 11/29/2018 I don’t want this to be over :( but overall great story! Hilarious story and Hermione and Draco’s relationship was very believable |
Guest chapter 27 . 9/23/2018 Isn't the last time I read this story have 38 chapters? What happened? |
Guest chapter 27 . 9/23/2018 Please add more chapter to this story, it is really interesting. I'm dying to read the other chapters. |
Cypher chapter 1 . 9/15/2018 I'm dying to read the rest of this amazing story and I realized that the author last updated this fanfiction in 2007. OK, someone may just stab me now... |
horsegirl2784 chapter 27 . 1/28/2018 Please continue this story! It's amazing and hilarious! |
your hater chapter 27 . 6/21/2017 Why didn't you added more chapters, huh? |
Grovek26 chapter 27 . 6/13/2017 Picked this story up and thoroughly enjoyed it. Some excellent comedic moments scattered throughout. I do hope to see more of it. |
Guest chapter 27 . 6/15/2016 Please check here . ?sid10872&chapter28 |