Reviews for A Little Murder
Meelo123 chapter 1 . 7/21
Omiiiiiiiigod KAWEEEEN. Yas yas yas yas yas. CAN YOU MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER LIKE YESTERDAY? My little Zutara heart just died and went to BDSM heaven LOL. On a serious note, you write very well. It’s engaging (not just because of the content). I’ve read the first chapter of so many of these Zutara fanfics and abandoned them because the writing was such garbage, I couldn’t get past it enough to take the story seriously. I’ve only read one other TOKKA story that was on this level of solid writing. I’d love for this story to continue (but seeing as it was posted in 2006, I won’t count on it lol!) or read any of your others! Thanks for sharing this!
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 6/8/2019
The story started off nice, but then we got into the making out territory despite the fact Katara is only fourteen at the time which makes the situation a bit weird. This isn’t to say teenagers don’t have relations, but I was kind of expecting it to be rating M for the violence and not expecting the sexual situation. When I realized it was coming, I was a little worried that it was MA which is something I go to another site for. The writer managed to pull the situation off well.
Me chapter 1 . 10/19/2018
How weird... Hope u read MY personal fav, dangerous ground. And my fav author, suave boogie.
ScarletRuins chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
I need more of this, it was soo good and well writen
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2017
Great story! :)
axel100 chapter 1 . 1/10/2017
Well the French refer to orgasms/cumming as "La petite mort" or "the little death". In that since Katara has been killing herself and Zuko several times over. Somehow I don't thinks she minds one bit.
avatartrash chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
This was so good...omg
Kittenshift17 chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
Hey Berry!

This was he first Zutara I've ever read and it was delightful! Thanks for sharing your talent with all of us!
heartfulyumi chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
that was short and sweet zutara 4 ever
Colleen chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
this is amazing! however both seemed a bit out of character (not that i didn't enjoy it ha) i just feel like zuko would be less vulnerable with katarra and she would be softer? maybe not. but your little after note i agreed with about how katara might have that crazy rough sex side of her that zuko brings out- who knows?
NarwhalWarlord chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
OK. I knew Zuko was nuts. Kitara too?

Gaaaaaah.

Well-written, but gaaaaaaaaah.

That was all kinds of weird.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
nice :D
babyvfan chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
Ok.

That was crazy, insanely amazing. I love it. I love it too much.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Love it
Nomby chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
THE FEELS! Tingles are everywhere after reading this! This was sort of like a sex-without-sex fic, and you've written it so amazingly. Great job!
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