You know, I thought that Tim said "I'm banging the car around the back" at first
Then I thought 'that can't be right' and looked again. Then I realised it said bringing.

Oh god my robins are criminals here wooooooh fascinating way to see then like that. Like the idea but still love them as heroes Teehee.

*cackles* I love it!

THIS WAS AWESOME! IOMG

I would love for a sequel! This is too good! I loved it!

just wonderful!

This story was truly beautiful. You just made my night amazing! Thank you! It was superbly written, great comedic value and I love how you had everyone interact. I know it's a bit far fetched asking for a sequel even though this was made in 2006 but it's worth a shot. I don't care if it's 500 words or 5000, any sequel to this would be amazing!

Oh my gosh, with was fantastic! Is there gonna be a sequel or something cause I ADORED this!

I'm very impressed. Good Job!

I love this

lol, I absolutely loved this. Jason and Tim and dick... all together on the other side of the bend. a very interesting take on the brothers. Thanks so much for writing!

Sequel?

Will you write more? THIS IS AMAZING!

Haha, .AWESOME! I just LUV to see teamwork between Dick, Tim and Jason, hah the way Dick said this: "Can we recruit a few girls, Dick?"

"Sure, why not? Then they'll blab on us and we'll spend 40 years in prison until we're old and ugly." XD

I LOVED this story. Such a cool idea with the three of them together! You did an awesome job of writing them, humor and all. If you did a sequal, that'd be totally cool! (With more Batman-ish Bruce...Or maybe he finds them and blackmails them into fighting crime...and the three of them work for him like Charlie's Angels! :D )

Anyway, I have a small (cough!) critique here for you, I hope you find it useful!

So first of all, in those few paragraghs where you explained all their backrounds, try not to make it such a "telling story." You could incorperate most of those things in the plot. For example, you already showed us that Dick was the leader and Jason was the "black sheep" and that Tim was the younger imature one in their dialouge beforehand. It becomes almost redundent when you tell us. Of course, it's pretty interesting to see their backgrounds and how they've been changed, just make sure you put it in a little more subtly.

Also, you wrote "ALL SYSTEMS INFORCED" but I think you meant "Enforced"

I also love the way you placed some of the smaller characters in there. It makes me smile :) ("I know a spoiler when I see one." "Why, Timothy, you're just like a detective." XD)

"When they're distracted, Tim, its your job to throw the light show." Should be: it's

"If all goes well, Tim brings the car around and Hay and I will carry the dough down." You mean "Jay" XD

"...I wish to present this year's Achievement Aware to Bruce Wayne..." Should be" Award

"Thick clouds of smoke started to billow up, sending guests into fist of coughing and chocking." Should be: choking

"Hopefully, Tim was going cover for him." You mean: Tim was going TO cover for him?

"Sorry, Mr. Wayne, but its for your protection." Should be: it's

"You're going to shot me with guns?" Should be: shoot

"So its three masked men just attacked the building?" You should re-word this, it's like two sentences mashed into one

Basically, I just want to say that IT'S is when you can split up the two words into IT and IS, as in: "It is green," or "It's green."

ITS is used for possession, as in, "The dog's bone..." or, "Its bone..." You have these two mixed up in quite a few places.

Also, I love their 20s way of talking, like "copper", and "doll." So cute ;)

"That's not likely, considered none of them had any real lethal weapons on them." Should be: considering

"Champagne, boys? 1966, a very good year." XD Definetely MY favorite year by far :)

Awesome story, dude, just awesome!