Oh my god Enjela.
When i first heard of her in the game i had always wondered what became of her.
There were so many things in Radiata Stories that could have been explained more throughly, but because it didnt have anything to do with the storyline, was left alone, leaving me unsatisfied.
Thats why its so great how this story gives what i want, i hope that in future chapters that this story will explore the other things in Radiata, such as the Falvern, the four legendary weapons, Elwen and so on.
Keep up the great work!
.. Is what i want to say but this hasnt been updated in forever and is probably long gone from ever coming back

...wow...

Hm..this is good, but a major spoiler seeing as I haven't done human side yet...n.n' I went with the non-humans...ehehehhe...heh...n.n'

Dragon Lair huh? Are they going to fight celestial queen or lenneth?

innteeressting..

Okay im subscribin, ill read on if it gets better

Gah. You nailed Genius' character.

-Is jealous-

okay...To the Dragon LAir Cave then onward to the Order of Disortion where Valkyrie is waiting

Please continue it! It's fawsome

A good chapter. The descriptions and background information really help to add fullness to the characters.

Poor Genius never will get an answer to that principle will he? Oh well, it seems Jack now has a party to go to Dragon Lair Cave. I'm sure the knowledge of the Weissheit siblings will be very helpful. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow! This was a very compelling chapter. Very good! A Ganz and Adele pairing is very intesting. I also like the story Genius told.

Yet again you have produced a most wonderful chapter. I was in tears during the flashback for Genius and leona. And after reading this I think that Adele and Ganz look good together - I never would have thought of that pair. And their flashback was so cute!

But what really made this chapter was the brother-sister moment. I can't wait to see what happens next.

great start... there a good story to begin with .. keep it coming.

Oh wow! Yes, this is a most magnificant fic. Your writting is always good to read. Your detail is nicely balanced without being overdominating (something I can't stand - too much detail kills it for me but not enough isn't good either - you do write so balanced).

Too bad about yout Star Ocean fic, I really liked it. But good for me that you are writing a Radiata Stories fic, so I'm happy.

Excellent story. I'm really impressed by the way you've tied together a lot of the extra areas of the story. The battle between Tsukiyomi and Jack was nicely written. I assume those two will finish that fight later.

Enjela's appearance was unexpected, but welcome. I'm interested to see what's going to happen when they get to Dragon Lair Cave. Anyway, I'll be anxious to read the next chapter.

Very good fanfic. Very dramatic! I like it. I can't wait for more.