"He knew no other way to express his care and affection than in the cover of night. That was all he had been taught. Hate existed when the sun was shining above a clear blue sky, love only came to him in coolness of evening when his brother came for comfort."

that was an amazing line, it really was! i loved this, just as i did the first one. im not sure whether you should write another one, it's very good to do the two POV's and leave it there. But then again you could write the morning after and Sirius could be thinking about how he was wrong about how he thought. And Luna wasn't that bad becasue she bought light with her and with Light it bared a new day with Remus or sometihng like that. Do you know what i mean? eh, it was just an idea.

Loving your work,

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OMG! Even better than than IN THIS MOMENT!

I found the idea of seeing a werewolf as Apollo, the sun god, odd but I like it!

Great ending line!

Which of the two did you write first? Or both at the same time?

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Oh this is just as good as your other one! I like the added italics, i think they just bring something a little extra to the story.

Now, am i being incredibly thick and getting the wrong end of the stick or is the line 'love only came to him in coolness of evening when his brother came for comfort' rather suggestive or am i just perverted that way?

Either way, this is a fantastic piece of writing!

Most of the chapter was sweet, and nice, but I think most of the italic parts were a little overdramatic. Perhaps try more explanation of the situations and less description? The non-italic description was actually pretty good, but the italics parts stuck me as a little cliched?

You wrote a sequel! yay! this was sad, too, though. Dark. Apollo, yes, it suits. In more ways than one, but I'm a bit of a mythology buff, and I go to a very, erm... liberal school, shall we say. keep writing! ::huggles::