great story

I really enjoyed this story. I have been up for nearly 3 hours completing this story! You are an amazing writer and I hope you continue to write. Thank you for making such an awesome story

Ch. 22 Matt Dillon being dallas,s favorite I saw what you did there

This was a pretty alright series! Although, there are some flaws. In the book, the characters would constantly smoke when something like all of this happened, to calm everyone down. I also feel that all of the other characters injuries were too rushed.

Overall, this was pretty good. Since this was published at 2009, you probably have gotten better at writing. Goodbye!

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This is good!

t h is is amazing!

This is amazing! Well done

I really like this. A big motif in the Outsiders is eyes, you managed to capture that really well through your descriptions of the different characters feelings reflected in their eyes. This is my second time reading this fic and it's just as great as I remember it.

Love it! I like how your making the story so descriptive!

I really like this. Keep continuing it! I agree that I'm a lot like Johnny cuz I always am quiet and barely talk! Well, anyway enough about me, write more!

Probably shoulda told ya earlier but the only reason Jonny was scared in the movie/book was ''cause of the socs jumpin' him in the first place

Reading the first chapter, it was just so intense and beautifully written. Then you wrote a-hole, and burst out laughing. Wait to ruin the intensity- okay you didn't really ruin it, but it was hilarious. Love the story so far, you're an awesome writer.

I'm getting a few hints that pony is about to go mute. Please don't make him mute!

They are a family Darry's daddy Sodapops mommy Steve Twobit and Dally are uncles/cousins and Ponyboy and Johnny are the babies

That was so descriptive and well written!