Supposed to have been posted 21 May 2011, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. but I had problems with my computer, and flaked on attaching these reviews to the original story threads for the last year. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'.

Republic Commando era: A Jedi tries to cut one important bond

The piece is introspective on the surface level, the Jedi tied to one squad of Clone troopers trying to sever that link emotionally. But knowing the outcome and who she is, I know it's a last gasp of Jedi sanity.

I can't believe I haven't read this before. Bad me! *smacks wrist*

Another for the C2... oh gods Im adding so many its unbelievable...

I liked this story.

May I have more to read of this?

Please!

If you check my profil you'll see I wrote a fanfiction to Etain and Darman. Maybe you like it.

Yay for Omega Squad! Write more! More I say! Etain's character was so awesome, as were Dar, Niner, Fi and Atin *insert emo hearts* and you portrayed Etain really well! I want to see more RC:HE fics from you, my friend, otherwise you're going to get smacked over the head with a DC-17! D

Keep writing!

Adrieal x x

P.S I'm publishing a RC:HE fic too... keep an eye out for it!

That's... that's it? THAT'S IT! More! More! More! Okay, I'm done being obnoixous now... (for at least five minutes... or less :P)

This was beautifully written- this is DEFINATELY going on my favorites list. Did you know there's a sequal to Hard Contact coming out? "Tripe Zero", and I want it! MINE, MINE! I dunno if it's out yet, but I want it!

Okay, back to the story: again, I cannot empasize how beautiful that was. I should think of another word, but I can't. *shrug* sorry. Oh, and thanks for reviewing my own fics!

Jade Rhade

That was so great! Go Etain!

Any plans on doing more Omega fics?

Yay! SW:HC fanfic! Thanks for the read. Lovely epilogue-ish feel to it. I added it to my C2 archive with pleasure. Etain isn’t a favorite character of mine, but you writing her POV was excellent. Can’t wait for more!