More please

cuuute~
i feel sad about her parents... :( but i'm glad harry and ron came around.

i agree, that song is absolutely wonderful :)

this was super cute.
ty for writing

Really cute

Actually her parents are reacting like any normal parents angry and dissapointed in their child...god... please proof read this story or get a beta? Its been a few years so hopefully your writing has matured so you can fix this story so it can be great like the summary led one to believe.

Being a werwolf, Remus would have a better sense of smell and would have smelt that Hermiobe was either a werewolf or had been in contact with one

Another easy mistake...a Professor...let alone one so brilliant and well known to know almost everything at the school and dark arts...would not be stupid enough to tell a student to go out ALONE to get potiob ingrediants during a FULL MOON when there is a well know WEREWOLF living in the school ...ugh

She could have used her wand to protect herself
She could have climbed a freaking tree
Fang, Hagrids DOG would have obviosly smelt her or blood as she was less then 100 metres from the hut...come on...you could have planned this story a whole lot better! And its obly the this appears to be a mature flop and not really planned...this is dissapointing as it sounded really interesting in the summary.

I love the story idea but already there are a few...mishaps...Hermiobe appears OOC...ingrediants, like the ones she is collecting, she pribaly would have read are present during a full moon...she is too smart to makr a stupid mistake like this...sge never curses like that...and...why not send a patronus? call for help? apparate( as she is out enough to do so) ...so...yep...not off to a great start.

love, love, love your story such a great ending

She is in a forest full of tree, why couldn't she climb one high enough that the werewolf could not reach her. I am pretty sure wolves cannot climb trees.

This was a beautifully written fanfic. I love Remus x Hermione stories, and this one especially. I'm so glad you won 2nd place, and I can totally see why. Great job!

Yum! I love Remus... Can I keep him?

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I really liked this story. It was well written and interesting. I didn't like Harry's response to there relationship I could see that being Ron's response but harry was always the calmer one who would listen to Hermione but otherwise good story.