| Reviews for Vegeta One-Half |
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shadowcat chapter 4 . 10/15/2012 HAHAHAHAHAHAH OMG U STILLMAKE PICCOLO A PREV AHAHAHAHAHAH PLEASE MAKE HIM FLERAT WITH GIRL VEGETA I AM BEGGING |
shadowcat chapter 3 . 10/15/2012 HAHAHAHA OMG PICCOLO IS SO EVIL AND A PERV I LOVE IT BUT IT WOULD HAVE BE FUNNY IS HE FLIRTED WITH GIRL VEGETA I MEAN COME ON IT SO BE FUNNY PLEASE MAKE ONE LIKE THAT |
shadowcat chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 hahahahahahahaahah OMG tien ask girl vegeta out i was rolling on the floor trying to catch my breath from laughing |
Vera chapter 4 . 12/17/2005 Poor Jinzouningen Juunana-gou... Everyone else had a happy ending except for him. |
Vera chapter 2 . 12/17/2005 LOL! I liked that part when Bulma said that about Vegeta repopulating the race with Goku. |
kikyo chapter 4 . 3/28/2005 very funny. you did a great job of intertwining two stories. vegeta is one character i could never see as a girl, and that's why it's so funny that you picked him. but i found that this sentence didn't make much sense Unfortunately, none of the warriors can match the androids individually, much less together, and soon there is no one left to try. shouldn't that be the other way around? that they weren't a match for the androids together, much less individually. did chichi ever find out the pig was yamucha? that's not entirely clear, but it seems she does. if so why is he still alive? seems to me, if she had found out, he'd be dead right about now. also, the ending could use some work, but really great with the humerous parts. |
Garowyn chapter 4 . 11/24/2004 Very funny! |
Serpent King chapter 4 . 10/21/2004 Why not make a sequel where Cell shows up and they use water from the Spring of Drowned Octupus. How an octupus drowns is beyond me, but it does exist. |
Sugarhigh6 chapter 1 . 7/14/2003 Ranma 1/2 is all I have to say. |
Kalamity Kat chapter 3 . 1/15/2003 ROTFLMAO! This is all I can say to this story. It's HILARIOUS! I love it, and I love it how you got all the Ranma curses into the DBZ universe. It's just too funny! There's only one problem with this fic - there doesn't seem to be an update. Sorry, don't wanna push, I know you have a life, but... I don't. KK |
Val chapter 3 . 12/15/2002 _ Sorry I didn't review any earlier, I forgot the title of this fic O_O however now I've read and loved it, so I want the next chapter, pwease *puppy eyes* |
jterra chapter 3 . 4/23/2002 Now that I've actually read some Ranma, this actually makes sense. You do a great job with the humor! You probably aren't real thrilled with this fic any more, but it's fun to look at how much your writing has improved in such a short time. I still think you could have lots of fun with this if you're still inspired. You did a great job transferring the characters without doing terrible damage to either set of characters. |
Val chapter 3 . 1/24/2002 LOL! GREAT! |
Rae George chapter 3 . 11/24/2001 Oh. My. Freaking. God. THAT WAS HILARIOUS! You are going to write more of this! *begin jedi mind trick* You WILL work on this! You WILL update this (and Sojourn, dammit!)! *end jedi mind trick* 'Kay? |
Dizifish chapter 3 . 11/21/2001 lol. yay, finally a new chapter. . keep up the good work |