| Reviews for In The Company of Secrets |
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DrarryIsDaBomb chapter 89 . 3/29 Omg I know it's been years but please please write more on this I didn't read it all for nothing it's such a good story I only want to see what happens next |
sunandkp chapter 89 . 10/26/2019 The best one I have read on this site. Pity you have abandoned it. |
fhl1234 chapter 89 . 7/13/2019 Excellent read. thanks for sharing. |
fhl1234 chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 Good first chapter. |
Skepsis Forever chapter 26 . 6/28/2019 Oh frak, that's a horcrux, isn't it? That's Salazar's equivalent of Tom's diary. And the implication is he used his snakes as sacrifice like Tom used enemies/random bystanders, probably because some bit of magic Salazar knows that Tom didn't. The question is, is he content to stay a painting or is he going for a Sith resurrection - basically what Tom tried to do with Ginny? |
Guest chapter 19 . 11/24/2018 I see why you abandoned this story. Perhaps you can salvage what's left of it and do a rewrite |
howlsword chapter 89 . 6/28/2018 very very good story, please update asap... |
bernicrumb1944 chapter 1 . 3/10/2018 This was absolutely intriguing and one of the most complex fan fictions that I've read to date. It kept me in its grip from the very beginning all the way through to the end of Chapter 89. While I totally support your right to stop writing if you were no longer enjoying it, I do wish that you had written the synopsis that you promised back in chapter 61. Even a bare bones one would be appreciated. If I started to list the things in this tale that I love best, this review would easily rival the length of one of your longer chapters. I will say that I am most impressed at your development of just what Dark Magic is and how it goes well beyond the "Dark is evil" trope found in canon and in almost every fan fiction I've read over the past couple of decades. This story will go on my re-read list, and I will enjoy using my imagination to figure out just what the future will bring for Harry, Ginny, Salazar, Opa, and the rest with all of the challenges they face. Well done! |
Anon chapter 4 . 2/7/2018 Idc if there is no Drarry but damn it, don't tease. |
Leonhard van Euler chapter 9 . 8/8/2017 Hm. Well I'm confused by this story. I can't deny that it is well-written or that the plot is evidentially well thought out, but the fact remains that I find it somewhat confusing. 1. In the summer before Hogwarts you sometimes stated something about umbridge, and then you mentioned Sirius making it hard to deduce what year you were talking about (5th or 6th). 2. What is the idea of this story? Strip away the magic and what do you haveis it a story about trust or love or character development? I usually find that the best fics are the ones that reveal this early on in the first few chapters. 3. I love the OC characters. It's a nice change not to have the typical Mary Sue characters. Mercury is particularly intriguing. 4. Ron and Hermione were always a large part of Harry's life and whilst I do not like them much myself, I find that you should have explained their absence somewhat better. 5. Ginny is confusing to me. She is a well written character, but if you were to name her... Sally, I would not recognise Ginny within her. These are my first five points... I will continue reading the story and will give further feedback as I go along. Have a nice day! |
Priya Ashok chapter 89 . 3/21/2017 Excellent story so far. Thank you. |
mckertis chapter 31 . 7/14/2016 The story is barely coherent. Too bad really. |
Pathseekerme chapter 57 . 6/30/2016 "Fate's Joke"! Absolutely wonderful! Using the name like they will be getting together to play D D? Even better! I know it seems like I just keep saying I love this story, but I really do! Thanks for writing it! |
Pathseekerme chapter 49 . 6/30/2016 I love this story! It seems to me that the list of commands given to the elves while Harry has been at Hogwarts is, more or less, proof of Dumbledore's paranoia and dementia and how far they've grown. Thanks for sharing your work! |
Pathseekerme chapter 43 . 6/30/2016 Awesome! I am enjoying this story more all the time. I really find your gift for word-crafting to be quite phenomenal! Thanks for the hard work and for sharing; you are greatly appreciated! |