awesome job love it's

So sad... Nice how you pictured her death. I really like this

Aw I loved this story. So sad, though. Poor L'Arachel, and Ephriam and Dozla too. Though it's kind of poignant for her to meet the same end as her parents.

This story was very well-written, and you portrayed L'Arachel so spot on. Great job!

... You really know how to pull the ol' heartstrings, eh? Touching.

Yes, I am scrolling through your FE stories.

Try a FE9 story (Path of Radiance,doh). That't be one helluva have-to-read.

(Don't own it? Simple! Do what I did, and sleep over at a friends house who has it! I got 8 hrs of play, 15 chappies! Enough to start, at least.)

aw...that was sweet and sad. It was a good closing line, and the whole thing about saying goodbye might be a tad bit cliched but it was written effectively. Ephraim's feelings seemed very realistic to me. Good job.

~Lemurian-Girl~

OMG! Amazing as usual Pure! You've captured the personalities of the characters so well! -cries- Poor poor Princess... It's such a touching story, well done once again!