Thanks for the hard work loved the story _

This was so compelling and well written. I loved every word!

This was such a sweet and lovely read omg (dabs eyes). I loved the scene(s) where Iruka died... but then Kakashi brought him back..! (CRIES) And the ending was so sweet and perfect. Wonderful work!

Eh I wish people would leave honest unbiased reviews. This story was rather frustrating to read.

This was an extremely well written story with well thought characters and an interesting line of narration. Plus, the ending was quite surprising and uplifting! Thank you very much for this piece of work, made my day. Cheers!

i could not stop reading this and it had me on edge almost from the beginning you did a super duper wonderful job

You really ought to warn for rape/non-con in a story. I understand you don't want to spoil things for the reader, but at least warn at the beginning of the chapter. Non consensual sex/ sexual abuse, is a trigger for way too many people. I liked you story so far, and I'll try to get past this chapter because I got invested in the plot, but rape is the kind of thing that makes me not want to read a story. Had I known, I wouldn't have started reading.

Really awesome story. Nice work

I think you are a very talented writer. You created a great plot and characters. I love your version of Kakashi and Iruka, you respected the canon but added them much more content. The smut was great too, wrapped in the whole of the amazing story. I hope you never give up writing, it will be such a waste. I enjoyed this story very much, thanks!

long, but, worth it

okay epic

Aww! I love it! I couldn't stop reading. Thank you for writing! XD

Wow, that was amazing! Great story!

Awe that was a wonderful story! So much mystery and action and angst, but with bits of brightness thrown in along with a happy ending. Thank you for sharing :)

NOOOOOOO! that UBBER BITCH!

AND KAKASHI!

HOW DARE HE!

IRUKA IS ON A MISSION! NO WAY WOULD JUST GIVE HIMSELF WHILE ON A MISSION

DUMBASSES!

THAT BITCH!

GAH!