Good story. I loved how you described goku’s pure and innocent and new to being fall in love with a girl. Very much like on the tv. It exactly like him. I’m glad falcon become good person after all. Chichi and goku’s love is very sweet as always. Thank you again for another great story.

Well, I finished! Reading your fanfic made me very happy, I hope you don't mind me writing another review heh. I just have a lot of feelings (good for you if you get the quote lol) and I want to get them all out by writing. You are very good at writing, continue to keep up the awesome work!

Okay, so I told myself I would read all of it first and then review. However, I like this story so damn much I felt guilty about not giving you a deserving review lol. I'm really enjoying this and Goku is just so cute with his clueless and naive personality! I love Goku x ChiChi so much and currently the only fan fictions I'm reading are about them hehe. That Falgon guy pisses the hell out of me though, I sure hope he'll pay in the end. Anyways, there's my review for now, I'm gonna get back to reading and I hope you like reading reviews, because I'll probably be doing one after I finish this :D

Love this story! Only issue is Bulma was at the look out, then down in the cave?...so when did she arrive down to the cave, if she was up with Kami during the fight in the beginning. Thats my only issue, so maybe add Bulma going down to help the boys, or something. Great story & really enjoyed the GochiNess.

I really enjoyed reading this . It was a nice sweet story and you did a really good job!

Poor Goku, he really doesn't know what he has gotten into. At least he'll meet chi chi! I just love how innocent, happy, and carefree he was!

i love this story but i dont like it when there is a romantic scene in btw chichi n goku suddenly bulma pops out of nowhere like when chichi kissed him he thought that bulma had kissed him on the cheek n he sawed chichi naked he thought that he had seeen bulma naked too i dont like it i mean its a gcc fic n i hate bulma alot

Goku scramed(like a man).

I COULDN'T HELP BUT LAUGH AT THIS. NICE CHAP

nice chap

Noooooo! Fuck Falgon he shouldn't have helped goku so then when goku won he could kick his ass!

Ahhhhhhhhhh! So cute! I love it!

That was a very satisfying story (although I tend to enjoy stories that are more R rated), I enjoyed it thoroughly. The writing is very easy to read, I'm glad I finished it :)

Aw here we go again...rescue the damsel in distress.

WTF!...trouble?

Omg love this story I was crying at the end so touching but great story