This is such a deep oneshot. I like it a lot, especially on a perceptive front. You described his characteristics and feelings well, putting them into a different context other than at the end of the episode where everything was okay again.

I love how he seemed to be both relieved and dissapointed near the end, as Sheppard had saved the day again and he was just thrown away as a side-kick or, in his lingo a 'spare part'. The metaphor was well placed, as was the setting.

Rodney McKay is a difficult character to understand, yet you portray him so well. The end not only provides a slight closure, but leaves few things open as to let somebody imagine the possible outcomes of the events.

Overall, I loved it. You are a very talented writer and this is proof of that.

Yours,

Exangeline

Oh, no, no Rodney, don't think like that! *gives him big hugs* Great piece, just so sad! Thanks.

Totally awesome. I love where you ended it and how you put it. *faves*

Such a sad story, that Rodney felt he had no one to turn to who would not judge him.

Awsome as always. Very dark, powerfully written. Last line - perfect.

Oh that a very dark place to end it. Loved it :D

Damn, nice thoughts. Well written, makes sense, explores something valid and relevant.

Very nice! Thanks for sharing.

Great story! I love the little bits of agitation included from the withdrawal, and Rodney's characterization is done wonderfully. :)

Oh wow, that was exquisite.

Love the way you left us hanging at the end with a very important and scary question.

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Krys