Aaah! Holy fuck! I was NOT expecting that! Trelawney is Vates, and Voldemort is Dumbledore’# son!? Sure as hell explains how evil Dumbles and Voldemort both are.

This story is one of my favourites. I wish it would be continued because it’s so great. Hopefully the author will return to it one day

what happens to the story? i’m hooked into it!

This is one of the stupidest stories ever.

This is a different type of story for me, and I am very excited for the new chapter. I hope this has not been abandoned.

Anti portkey wards are a thing. Why did harry or Ron not cast them. All this training and to make such a simple and stupid mistake? Not believable. There were a lot of completely unbelievable actions and responses in this story. If dumbledor has to die, why didn’t Dobby just kill him when he had dumbledor completely helpless and vulnerable? It made absolutely no sense to keep playing things out of dumbledor is so easy to get to and to neutralize. It defeats the purpose of the entire book for that to be written and then not to have taken advantage of. 1/10 because everything after Dobby took dumbledores blood is completely and utterly pointless.

Why doesn't Harry have a Black ring? He was made Sirius' heir and next head of the Black family, so how could Ron replace him?

Now that Harry is exonerated, he should sue Hermione for the destruction of the Cloak. Being a Hallow, it was a priceless heirloom. I realize Harry probably didn't know that it was a Hallow, but it was an heirloom at the least. I am very surprised that Dumbledore didn't set on her about that.

Absolutely fantastic story. I know it hasn't been updated in 12 years, but I'm still going to follow it, just in case.

I half-wanted the elves to call him Paddy-foot.

Intriguing. Update soon.

Nooo! You can’t kill Neville!

This is quite an enjoyable story. I like all your plot twists, and the Elf culture, and Severus growing to see Dobby as a friend, and I wish there were more chapters of this, as I'd love to know how it ends.

And will this story ever 'write itself out'? Almost a full 12 years on hiatus. It didn't seem too awfully far from being complete. Wish Hemione had had a spell of loyalty on her too. And wish Neville hadn't had to die.

Good writing, but I have to be honest... I hate your versions of Harry and Ron. They’re annoying, selfish, slightly sadistic little brats.