| Reviews for Eyes Wide Open |
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Chilli Paneer chapter 1 . 5/1/2019 I'm so turned on...lol But i just love it,my ebullience wants more & more Seriously...you're just awesome author & i didn't wrote a comment to any fanfiction authors,first time...don't know...the story & it's emotions ( just speechless)... I love it...keep it up bro & don't stop here please Want more TYKA.. |
Nekoyasha12 chapter 19 . 1/25/2015 That was an awesome story. And as for there being so more of a plot, there could most certainly be a third sequel! This one focusing on that fact Tyson, now thanks to his mixed blood(and since hybrids are such an enigma) has become pregnant.(also can relate to that scare before with Tyson, Daichi and Kai x3) You could also bring in Hilary, who could have crushed on Tyson and Kenny, who could have crushed on Max, and despite them having been gone for so long they still remain adamant on finding the two boys. Also Hiro's reaction on his brother's change. Now he can't say they the two of them can't really hang out since he's half wolf. Some old enemy/flame from Ray and Kai passed could resurface. And finally, so Max won't be left out of the family loving...he could either: 1. Get bitting by some vampire that CAN get pregnant or... 2. Being a vampire through Ray and just adopt/find a stray baby and raise it as there own. I'd just seriously would love too see just one last addition to this beauty. Regardless of your choice though... I loved this fic! x3 |
Crush-Chan17 chapter 19 . 11/23/2013 Haha, I read this entire trilogy in like two or three hours. Hah. It's just so good! And I normally don't like vampire stories myself. But I'm glad that I started with the prequel as the whole 'stalking vampire' thing pulled me in. |
takuya chapter 19 . 12/29/2011 oh this story was so very cool, am glad i finally got the time to finsih reading it |
LazyLuck13 chapter 19 . 10/28/2011 I can't believe it's finished... *blinks* Wow... I loved the part when Max said it would be easier if he could start over and Rei clasped his hand introducing himself. :) Same goes for the last part with Kai and Tyson. And I loved it even more with the lyrics! I mean, it's 'Passion' from Utada Hikaru! :D That song suits the chapter so much! There are sadness and pain, but if we can overcome it, there will be a new start for us. That's what I was thinking when I read this chapter. You're right, the end is kind of bittersweet and open, but in such stories that kind of end is the best I think. Thank you for all your hard work up to now. Take care too! |
LazyAuthoress chapter 19 . 10/28/2011 I hate when he reach the end of things! This story is genious! |
LazyLuck13 chapter 18 . 10/21/2011 Oh my! O.O Update! 3 Yay~! Finally! Kai, Rei and Max finally know Daichi's still alive! And he could save Tyson too! The bad guy, Brooklyn ,is dead, Tyson and Max are safe, Daichi is still alive... 'Eyes Wide Open' is truly nearly coming to an end. *sighs* This is a bit sad...Well, there's a end to all good things, rigth? ;P And I don't mind the lyrics...Though I must admit when I saw the first lyric I thought the chapter ended. *sweetdrops* Haha! Thanks for the chapter! I look forward the next one! |
LazyLuck13 chapter 17 . 10/14/2011 Oh man, I loved this chapter. Fight and all, and in the same time the story advanced quite well I think. Rei and Kai found Max and Tyson! :D ...Though Ty's dying. ): I knew it would be too easy if Tyson was to only become a werewolf... Haha! Seriously? You just remembered what you wanted to do 4 years ago with this fic? Oh man, bad luck. But that's not bad. I mean, in big, from what I understand you wanted to do, the only difference is that that new vampire never showed up in this version. Personally, I quite liked how this story turned out. ;) Thanks for the chater! I look forward the next one! |
LazyAuthoress chapter 17 . 10/14/2011 Oh Shit! |
Rukiabi chapter 16 . 10/8/2011 You are absolutely amazing. I've been so caught up with school that I haven't been able to keep my promise to readers of updating my fics, but you still manage to do it. I really like that you think ahead and set up the plot before you write it, hence Daichi being half wolf half vampire (I'm guessing). Well done. |
LazyLuck13 chapter 16 . 10/7/2011 *blinks* Daichi! He's alive! And he became a wolf! Or werewolf...Or half vampire and half werewolf?...Whatever, he's alive! And Brooklyn...It seems I hate him more and more... Really? You'll complete this story this month? Yay! *jumps up and down* Thanks for the chapter. I look forward the next one! |
takuya chapter 15 . 9/21/2011 oh that was super cool |
LazyLuck13 chapter 15 . 8/28/2011 Update~! 3 So that's why Brooklyn fought Daichi!...Okay, now why did he and his pack resurrected Kurai? Haha! Each time I've got answer to my question another question pops in my head. But I suppose I'll have to wait for the next chapter, right? ;) And now Tyson is kidnapped too! D: It's like Shattered Memories all over again. Thanks for the chapter! I look forward the next one! |
Rukiabi chapter 14 . 8/16/2011 That was an amazing chapter. I love how you incorporated Daichi into the the two couples relationship and the development of all the characters. Please don't leave us on the cliffhanger for too long. I can't wait for more lemons hahaha ! |
LazyLuck13 chapter 14 . 7/16/2011 ...Shit. O.o I think it took me some minutes to make me realize Daichi was dead. I didn't see that coming. For the fight, well, I don't think it's vague. Thought I don't really understand why Brooklyn attacked Daichi. Actually what I don't understand is why he got involved in the fight at all...Is Brooklyn with Kurai and Kireinai or something? Thanks for the chapter! I look forward the next one! |