I feel as though the last bit was not as well thought out as the rest of the story, and the ending...didn't feel as though it fit the rest of the story. It was sort of a Sahrab and Rustram situation, ya know, where the son dies before the father.

Oh no! That didn't go the way they were hoping. Very well thought out plot, but so sad...

The final chapter was a little confusing, but it was a good story overall.

Cool. The "OMHOMEOMEOMEOMHOMHOMEOMEOMEOMHOMHOMEOMEOMEOMHOMHOMEOMEOMEOMHOMHOMEOMEOMEOMHOMHOMEOMEOMEOMHOMHOMEOMEOMEOMH" really destroyed the end for me though.

This has been really quite good thus far.

Argh you bitch you made me cry!

0o0...

TT OMG... Such a sad ending...

Thank you for putting this piece up for the world to read it.

i love it but if harry dided more fun and seeing severus misrible to but apart from that i love it

did harry die!

Simply depressing. Excuse me while I go cry my eyes out.

Why did you have to die? WHY?

I stoped reading here, because I do not like this story. It had a very good beginning, but then I had the feeling as if you got bored with it. I personally don't care about Ginny at all. I find it very strange that Harry, who did not like it to be famous at all, get's together with a girl who is his fan. I know, that wasn't your idea, but I think that is competely nuts. Vin

wow. just wow.

great chapter

Omg i love thiss so far!

Omg i love thiss so far!