A good end...I don't think they necessarily had to end up together though in my imagination, of course they did.

That was a bittersweet ending. Must say I enjoyed this fic very munch!

:'( I'm very sorry I didn't read this before reading TSL. I liked Fin better in this chapter...I happen to know what book that is and I think they do look a lot a like.

Poor Munch, always in conflict. I have to say I don't like the way Fin is playing out in this one, it doesn't seem to be him...

Anyways, loved this chapter.

*gasps and sobs a little* I can't believe it...TSL is not the same...*little tear runs down cheek*

Good chapter. They seem to get better as they go on.

Ah, a bit of Munchie's past. I see where Tear Stained Letters came from. I love how Munch is not a people person and a people person at the same time. Absolutley love your writing and this chapter proves no exception. Btw, love the songs in the beginning.

So second chapter...it may be ust be because I'm tired and out of my mind sick, but I found it a little confusing...

“Well, maybe I'm not playing Munch. Maybe I'm playing a different part tonight.”

That is my favorite line of all time. I finally got around to reading this, aren't you happy and I think it was awesome!

yay! the poking worked! well...somewhat. At least I got to read this...but hey, I'm not complaining, seeing as you've turned me into a J/O shipper...if Made to Be Broken doesn't get finished, it's all your fault...just kidding.

Anyways, now that I've finished rambling, this was awesome, as always.

you know, I'm about to start giving up on trying not to cry when I read your stuff. Seriously. You had me in tears by the end of this chapter, and even more so because this one is finally finished, and it's wonderful, as usual. And no, it's not only because it's Munch and Liv...meh. Now look what you've done, you've got me rambling...and before I start getting on your nerves, I shall go. :runs away:

I hate you. Not really, but you just made me tear up again and now...now I can't concentrate on mine.

What can I say that I haven't already said, you? I don't know, but there's only one more chapter to go, right?

wow. That's just...God, do you have to make me cry by the end of every chapter? Ah, well, at least it's Munch. *does the happy dance...* anyways, yeah. So NBC has to go and reair Raw again...stupid network. Before I start ranting, let me just say that I loved this and I shall go.

I thought I had reviewed last time, but I don't think I did. Sorry about that. This story is really very good.

You write quite well, and really get people into the story with what you say.

Keep up the wonderful work,

Kay

Well, it's about damn time! ;) Just kidding, but I was wondering how long you were gonna sit on this thing.

See, because you've read books and watched movies, the war experiences seem real. Ignoring the incredible writing that's here, that makes it stand on it's own.