Fox, poor ranma, so sweet she miss all tendo family, and her dad, her school. *hug* ranma

a bit confused \(maybe cause i skimmed it lol) but mostly good

Excellent

Distasteful. While somewhat well written, your sense of humor with the audience and flagrant breaking of the fourth wall stain what could of been a good fanfiction.

It has good points, but by and large the problem with this story is a general malaise rather then anything in particular. Your writing style and usage of parallel universes to fit in a joke, are rather distasteful.

I am not one to critisize without giving a suggestion, however, so I leave you with this little tip: make it a plot point on why Ranma is suddenly acting so damned girly. Ranma spent a long time with this curse without similar problems, so this better be an outside force doing this. You remind me of my peverted brother with your views of how a man in a girls body would react.

Yay your alive lol great chapter update again!

best story I've read in a long time (imho ofc ;-) )

Ingenious idea with the insertion of leetspeek. I never thought I'd see an author use 1337 in their stories. Good work.

Cool what next for Ranma and Spice?

Good work on the fanfic so far!

It seems that Spice and Ranma have more in common than what they're willing to admit! Nice work on the humour and sexual innuendoes without the actual sex involved.

Great update!

Continue the good work!

This is either some misogynist's poorly written rape fantasy, or a masterful troll. Jury's still out on that one.

Either way, I don't intend to touch this... *thing* again. Total ignorance of the subject matter makes me wonder if the author's ever read the source material, and the attempts at humor make me ill.

Hmm, I vaguely recalled reading this once, good update, even though I had to reread the entire thing to be able to place this chapter, and not be lost as to what was going on with whom...

Overall, still a good, semi-funny story. But you're writing style is odd.

Spartan Academy? I want Kekko Kamen! I wanna see Ranma humiliate Satan's Big Toe! THAT is the Spartan Academy!

WohoO! Update the other one!

I really like the story thus far . . . please tell me that you will be finishing it. I would absolutely hate to see this story stop, especially at such a *harrowing* position.

In any case, love the story, would love to see it continued.

like the platform 9 3/4 crossover, had me laughing my butt off when the red haired lady just bounced off the wall.

Loved it, seems like a great story so far.