That was mean, how could you do that? Making Kirby and Waddle dee smart and rude, Adeleine a brat and Ribbon a sadistic one.

Wow! That was one amazing story! Props to you for doing this!

And that ending was interesting. Mario Link Zelda and Fox come in like that and having Kirby Ribbon Waddle Dee Adeleine and Dedede join them on another adventure.

Poor Adeleine.

Eh. Not sure about Kirby talking here but I'll still read this,

Oh this I can tell is gonna be good!

I'm surprised by how few stories there for Kirby 64 it is one of my all time favorite N64 for games.

Welcome to smash club

Love this!

The Starfox 64 references in Chapter 25 were hilarious.

sweet and sour

Well, I have an inkling as to what that team is :P

Thank you very, very much for sticking with this story for such a long time. Not a whole lot of video game novelizations actually get finished. And yup, I stuck by the whole time because this game will ALWAYS have a special place in my heart :D

I'll be sure to read your next story. Carry on, good sir.

How could you end it like that...I do have to admit that I guessed about Zelda, Link, Fox and Mario from the descriptions that you gave and I'm quite curious as to what else would happen...

I, honestly, want to see a sequel of this coming from you, but I highly understand if the sequel is more of a challenge than anything else.

DASM

555

Henshin Complete

P.S.: Would love to see more stories from you in the future, especially since you did such an excellent job writing the game out in such a fashion.

Now, that's an interesting little idea thing to put in your story, but I assume the next chapter will be the last? Because it looks like it's about to go into a whole other plot. I mean, unless you were only going to stop it there (whatever "there" will be), then in that case, forget this review :P

Personally, i loved how you somehow put every level of all the worlds into the story and how you named off every enemy. What i really didn't like about the story was the constant abuse and bullying towards Adeleine. Yes, she's a young girl, but she's helpful in many ways than just painting. I somewhat expected it from Dedede, but none at all from Ribbon, espcially the spanking.

Besides that, everything else was great.

This story is beyond amazing. The personality you added to the characters was beautiful. I will never forget this story, and how much life it gave to the game Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards.

Still, would you please add the final chapter soon? You said there was another chapter after this one at the top of this chapter.

Above all else, thank you for giving us this wonderful story!

(I'm not lazy, I promise. I just felt like being semi-anonymous.) I found this story LONG before now. I just didn't know what to review about it. I'm sorry...

Anyway, this story is, well, everything from entertaining to epic. Ha, I don't know how else to word that. But I hope you get my point. I love it when characters personalities are "expanded" to fit, somewhat, unnoticablly throughout the plot. In a good way though!

I'm eagerly awaiting the end. But I'm not rushing you, honest!

~Player-5 (if you wanted to know)