| Reviews for One Too Many |
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   Shi no tamashii chapter 15 . 6/6/2015 How cute :3 |
| Miss Dreavus chapter 15 . 6/10/2009 Overall, great story! Nice plot, ideas well structured. However, they was a detail that caught my attention: James' arm. It's been broken and bruised for 9 or 10 chapters I think! You keep saying : "he's not gonna survive'', "it never hurt that bad", AND, he never stops loosing blood... but he manages to make out with a girl, being dragged off several times, his hands tied behind his back and kicked on the floor landing on his arms, he also "threw" Jezebel across the room? In the state you've described him to be, he wouldn't be able to raise a finger. It's the part I have to point out being unrealistic (of course, in the matters of the universe; because let's face it, not a lot in Pokemon is "realistic" ... but I think you can understand my point. Other than that, great suspense, managed to keep them in character, great job! |
| dittoinaus chapter 15 . 9/6/2006 Awesome fic loved it. Well done to you. Nice ending. Keep me in suspence. |
| Rockos Mom chapter 15 . 1/4/2003 Doesn't that mean "One to much"? |
| Adam Giglio chapter 15 . 12/11/2001 I LOVED IT! For never watching the show, I enjoyed it thorughly. You had nicely done character development, wonderful diologue, and interesting plot twists. You really have a talent for writing and I hope you write much more! I really love your descriptions; they are very thorough and I know exactly what you want me to see. Hehe, and there was some kinky parts highlighting the way trough the story (I especially enjoyed the last few paragraphs). Can't wait to see your future ventures! Well, bye bye! |
| Jo chapter 15 . 11/6/2001 hey! you finally got it done! I loved it. You finished up everything that needed to be, cleared up each loose end, and managed to throw some humor into a basically serious story as well. (if i were meowth, i'd want a seperate room too. couldnt get any sleep. lol) you have to write more, because you obviously have a tallent for it. Let me know should you ever decide to write some more. i'll drop you another review for it. ;) Happy writing! |
| o1 chapter 15 . 11/3/2001 Yaaaaay! Cool fic, I loved it! |
| Jessie chapter 9 . 7/3/2001 hi Amy! the story is great! each part is realy exciting and you have done a great job writing it! luv Jessie (remember me?) |
| Shade chapter 14 . 6/21/2001 Very interesting! I little shippy for my taste, but a good fic nonetheless. This is one of the few rocketshippy fics I've read that actually have some substance-not just sexual references and purely physical attraction. Keep it up. |
| o1 chapter 14 . 6/21/2001 ARGH! This chapter has nothing in it! Please post it soon! This is a really great story! _ |
| Dragon Trainer chapter 12 . 6/16/2001 Oh no! Jessie, Meowth! You'll got to rescue, James. Dratini, drat, Dratini! Please continue soon, I can't wait for the rest! Dratttttt! Bye-for-now! |
| o1 chapter 12 . 6/16/2001 YESSSS! YOU WROTE ANOTHER CHAPTER! Ahhh! But the suspense, THE SUSPENSE! aarrrhghasakjdflkag *goes insane* PLEASE write more, and soon! please please please! you can't leave me hanging like this! LOL! . |
| Rocket Brat chapter 11 . 6/8/2001 Well, all I can say is WOW!This is the best fic I've read in a long time, this is AWESOME! It's like, the Perfect fic! It has everything! It's even updated frequently! You are the BOMB, Amymimi! Keep writing this, and when you're done, write another one! I could live off your fics! |
| o1 chapter 11 . 6/6/2001 This is exciting! Please continue it soon. _ |
| Dragon Trainer chapter 11 . 6/4/2001 Ok, you need to seperate the speech from the paragraphs, but other than that its Ok. Dratini! Bye-for-now! |
