You wrote this a long time ago and back then, I had read the story as a teenager and fell in love. However, as an adult, I now notice how hard it is to stay in the story with the grammatical and sentence structure errors that constantly pull me away from the story itself. Regardless, it's still a story I enjoy, and with a little cleaning up it could be amazing. But with those errors, it's difficult for me to become completely immersed and that's slightly disappointing.

Hi there! Chanced upon this fic and I must say that it's really amazing! Second CCS fic I have read, and just woahh.

It was really good how you allowed Syaoran to change after meeting Sakura, and yet revert back to his old self when he thought Sakura did not reciprocate his feelings. Honestly wouldn't have recognised him from the last chapter if I had only read the first! I think it's particularly apt because Sakura was meant for him, and prior to meeting Sakura he had his fair share of disillusionments (like Jin Tai) to handle.

I must add that you made the gradual attraction and also Sakura and Syaoran's fallouts really realistic! Those misunderstandings and the growing tension had me on the edge of my seat, and was really adorable to read. As with Eriol and Tomoyo, etc!

The gang component... It was really nice of you to show the deep bonds between members, whether it was on a random, get-under-your-skin way but especially when near the end there were so many casualties, and their deep sense of loss. I liked how you put much focus on how the hierarchy worked, how their intelligence system worked, and how they had different hideouts and various protocol! I think as a gang fic it was nicely done!

I was surprised that they had no economic undertones (like selling drugs) though which I would have imagined would sustain them, but I assume that would have complicated the focus away from the Authentic Divine... But the part I was a bit doubtful of was Sakura being roped into the gang! You explained it really well when you showed that she had a past with Syaoran and was the fourth wielder, but before that it just seemed... unlikely that they would initiate the emerald saviour under any circumstances, even if it was for the protection. And have Chiharu and Tomoyo go to the new hideout with Sakura seemed somewhat reckless... Regardless I think it advanced the plot nicely, so please don't mind!

Ah yes and I absolutely loved the chapter with Syaoran's birthday masquerade! So awesome. At any rate, I really enjoyed your writing style, the story, the attention to detail and characterisation! Thumbs up and thanks for sharing the story!

God, I feel the need to dissect wolf

Syaoran really needs to cut it with the "princess" thing.

Somebody has anger issues...

Your story has potential to be greater if you edit a few things. I enjoyed the story but a few things like the sentence structure made the story lose some of its quality for me.

He shouts too much... maybe he has an ager problem? _

fuck! fuck! a gang and police? shit man! and awesome! I'm bengali too but i have no idea how it can sound hot! hmm... Anyway, my first cardcap ffn. its good...

THIS. IS. THE. ONE. OF. THE. BEST. FANFICS. EVER! ω

You are fucking evil! Good chapter though...

Screw you for the end of chapter 25! :( I'm just gonna cry in a corner now... :'( (Then read the next chapter 3)

I just realized how long this story has been out... Oh well, it's still freaking amazing! :3

I haven't even gotten too far into it and already LOVE it!

I'm Bengali too, and it's so hilarious when people get confused over Bangla and Bengali XD
Anyway, I loved this chapter. Hopefully as I go on, it'll be just as gripping :D

I love this one. It is really great because it has a pulling in kind of story line. I hate those stories with bad plots. Great job!

-PH88