Why was it that Cloud look like a damsel in distress and always waiting for the hero to come and save him from whatever situation he's in?

This story was AMAZING. It was well-written. It was beautiful. It was just the most fun to read and such a well-told slow burn. I loved it. Thank you so much for the great read!

Loved this story! Nothing feels forced and it sticks to the game’s canon nicely. Great job!

I absolutely love the natural progression of Zack and Clouds relationship I must commend you on that excellent job

This is more Shounen Ai than Yaoi really, which is fine. :)
Zack isn't trying to actively get in Cloud's pants so it's pretty much a budding romance.

oH MAH GAWD

it has been such a long time since i kicked, screamed, cried, stutter because of a fanfic! and so many words and chapters i aM GOING TO JUST WEEP FOR DAYS IF THIS FANFIC ISN'T COMPLETE i don't want to check even though i like spoilers... bUT NOT THIS PLS. i'm still in chapter 12 . p;

last updated 2006(?) whICH IS A NO GO

but just wanna say! i love love love love this oh so so so much! nothing wrong has come into my mind at all other than "hmm.. i thought you're suppose to use a comma there.." but who am i to say that when eng isn't my main language? good work! amazing! much love!

CHAPTER 28!

I'm crying now, this made me feel so useless

funny,...i was right...he did pull piggytail...poor cloud

Jin is the son...wow i did not see this comming...that why the Trainer is so mean to cloud...but there must be some info in shinrah that he is his son, i mean he cant teach his son...thats somehow wrong...

so now i think the Jin Problem...can it be that ist like Little Boys who pull piggytail from the Girl they like...i will hhopefull see in the next chapters bevor the Story Ends unfinished
and why did Hojo give hinm two full yrings with Mako, it should be only one half...

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I haven't read such a great fan fiction in almost a while now. By far, your story is one of my favorites. The story was splendid! It had my smiling at such warm hearted/goofy moments and even sad almost to the point where I wanted to cry towards the end.

Hello, I have been reading for a couple of days now but I wanted to leave a review saying that this chapter made me actually cry. Seriously, I knew exactly how much Cloud was hurting and I wanna thank for capturing everyone's emotion so beautifully.

Can't wait to read the rest of the story. :3

Wow.. I loved this fanfic.. I guess in some way I was hoping that you would change the story line a bit so that Zack and Cloud would have a happy ever after. lol. Regardless, hats off to you! You've got a real talent for writing! :D