Wow, how emotionally torturing these chapters are. Yikes. But I like it. (Of course I like it! It was written by you! How could I not like it?)

Will this have another chappie? It's a slight cliffhanger, come on! You have to do at least ONE more chappie!

Hmm. . . .I don't remember getting the author alert for this. . . .good thing I was going to reread TLWH. . . .I saw that this had a second chapter. . . . .nice. I love how he still blames Sirius until the truth hits him in the middle of panic. . .but, is that it? Or are you going to show more of Remus? Maybe his thoughts when he finally sees Sirius?

Oh, great job. I don't think I ever read a first person Dumbledore fic. Neat missing moment, and of course anything with Sirius in it automatically gets fifty bazillion bonus points.

that was such a good ending :) very well written

oh wow. . .that was amazing! It would be nice that maybe there be a continuation like maybe with the perspective being Lupin, and then even Tonks, and some of the others that were close to Sirius like Minerva.

*releases breath* WOw, that was. . .interesting. I litterally paused for a minute trying to find the right word. . .I sort of new what would be Dumbledore's thoughts at the end, what with still the biggest mistake of his life, but the progression of his thoughts were really entrancing. I like how the first thing Sirius says is "Is Harry alright?" It's just. . .I'm still trying to find the appropriate word. . .really beautiful.