Daaaaang what a story. Oddly enough, this is exactly what I needed to read today. Helped me to sort some thoughts out. Thanks for sharing your creativity!

Someone should tell the stories about Forod and Yashaga.

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

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"You are leaving some behind?" squealed little Veisiliel. "Which ones?"

Tom and Maria have two cats. O.o

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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And Bella119 is dumb.

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"There is fine raiment in there," Nevhithien corrected her. "I had to pack some clothing to pad the books safely." Nonetheless she had the grace to look somewhat guilty. "Here now, I am repacking anyhow. You may pick out the titles you want me to leave."

They are Christians. :(

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

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"I know what you will do, Nevhithien. You will sigh endlessly and say you wish you could stay forever. You will bully and pester Alageth until she gives in and asks Mother to leave you there."

A horrible chaos reigns in the living room. T_T

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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"Such clever ears you have! Come here my love," said Thalawen, and Veisiliel went to her with a giggle. "Look at your hair, so tangled! Let me take a brush to it," said her mother, and picked up the ivory comb at her bedside table. As she brushed her daughter's hair she looked up at Fírhador. :She is dear to me. I shall miss her these six months.:

I'm an atheist and an anarchist, a professional disbeliever, if you will. ;P;

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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"There are still Orcs," he agreed, standing and taking up his garments. "And yet, they are not what they were, neither in number nor in organization, and they do not come to this place. This was obviously a small group, and it has received heavy dissuasion from returning."

Should gone to ao3. ;)

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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"You leap ahead a bit I think," he replied, though he too had turned the idea over.

The gang is lead by a ruthless criminal called Tom. :(

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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"I am not surprised," she murmured. "It is extraordinary! To think that such creatures… Not since the Ring War have they set foot upon this land. Fírhador, what does this mean for us? Nevhithien and I…tomorrow, how can we—?"

Stop writing. O_O

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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Disclaimer: Tolkien's works, characters and concepts are copyright J. R. R. Tolkien. The story Treed and the characters and events introduced in "Chapter I: The Sound of Trouble" are all copyright The Lauderdale (cartoon6 at hotmail dot com). "Chapter I" published January 5, 2006 and last edited December 25, 2012.

Tom sat in silence for 30 minutes. :D

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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"And how can I fail to be, with such sweet girls? Almost as sweet as their mother." He stroked her shoulder.

Growing this thick mustache has taken me quite a while. O_O

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

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Thalawen watched him as he clothed his nakedness. "Nevhithien and I will leave tomorrow with the dawn," she said. "If you have no fear for us then I will have none either."

Tom and Mary came up with a possible solution to their problem. T_T

I have a huge problem with this story. I am a huge fan of Anthony Burgress's 'A Vlockwork Orange' the original and not the butchered American Version. In the original piece, you have Alex, who is very much like your despicable orcs who razzle in the old ultra violence and the old in out in out. In the original novel the 21st chapter lays out how Alex grows up and is horrified by his past actions and goes on wanting to start a family and create. I think this is what made the story a well balananced piece of work and not a clutch your pearls feminist's nightmare. I'm not sure if you have seen the movie or read the American version but they cut that out and left it so that it appeared like Alex learned nothing and glorified violence.

Anthony Burgress said genuine fiction shows a character's ability to change and that there isn't a purpose in writing a novel in which you don't show a change in morality or wisdom in your chief character or characters. He went on to say that even trashy best sellers show characters changing and when a fictional work fails to show change and merely makes its characters resloute, set, stony and unregeneritable u are out of the field of the novel and into the fable or allegory.

None of your characters showed any transformation. Why have the elf survive the rape and stay with the band if none of the orcs evolved from her presence? No, she shouldn't form a romantic relarionship with any of the orcs, especially Kurbag, that would be too complicated to pull off in a way that doesn't make you come off as a creep but I don't see why you couldn't have had Elleluliniel form a sort of friendship with Kurbag ( even if it is only a ploy for her freedom) Elleluliniel is obviously stronger in body and mind than any other elf if all the others die from rape . You didn't seem to tap into her potential as a strong female lead. But I degress maybe that was your point, to write a tragedy with no hope. I personally hate stories like this they seem almost sexist in a way, makes me feel shitty for having a dick.

Rant over, sorry for all that this story just left a sour taste in my mouth in a bad way.

Great work! I have read "Orc brat" before and even before that "Mushog's Ride" so I came at it from the wrong end somehow but it was great to get to the beginning of it all! Thank you for the amazing stories!

Please note, this review isn't relevant to the chapter I'm currently re-reading. Also, I might be a bit drunk.

Ok, I'm not trying to be an asshole, but where are they getting the beer they drink? Like, I'm trying to imagine the countryside dotted with orkish liquor stores, but it isn't quite working. And where did Lagdush go between "Treed" and "Orc Brat"? Sorry, I'm an a*hole.