This was the best story I ever read! You write good. Please another one;)

ive read this story b4 and its really good so im reading it again :)..tho i just noticed one of your notes at the bottom that says "listen to papa roach theyre good" they are my favorite band ive seen them in concert 6 times and got to meet them once :) they are so freakin awesome!

wow ... intense lol

but really good

congrats

thanks for completing the story and for saving Ryan, Seth and Marissa.

my god that was beyond amazing! wow, what a finale! that was really good! honestly, i still have chills in the pit of my stomach! for a second there you had me scared! i thought ryan was the one who died..hopefully he's really fine. wow, that really was an awesome story and even if it took time to write, the whole wait was worth it. best damn chapter so far! ryan will always do anything to save his girl. i wish they would've lasted forever..anyway, you did a wonderful job with that story that I REALLY enjoyed reading. fantastic, thanks for writing!

Miracle, miracle! And what a nice one! ;) You saved everyone that mattered, thanks. Wow! :)

The story is good, but I think you're dragging it out too much. Seriously, four more chapters at the most should be plenty.

ah

what you cant leave it their!

please post more soon!

Awesome O.C. story can't wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Please update it soon _

~Tala~

that was just too short but amazing. ok i confess that i dont remember the whole story since i read it quite a long time ago but through reading the new chpaters i remembered the ending of the one before then the major plot of the story. i'm glad you updated this and well keep it going please! im already into it. suspense suspense hmm..

Oh seeriously speedy update! Huzzah!

I love your writing - I need more! X]

All hail SuperSeth! D

Keep going!

x

Ps. PapaRoach

Way to go Seth! :) Nice chapters, lots of action. Thanks!

Oh RYAN! D;

Fancy an update to help a worried soul?

I love it! _

Where have you ben? o

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good one. more pls

awesome