Aw! Such a romantic ending! Awesome!

Heart wrenching story...I hope it ends well. Great so far!

I just caught wind of this story. Your writing is good and plot was very suspenseful. Overall, this was a nice story to read. My only criticism is that despite the genre being in the romance category, there was no fire or passion or intimate/sexual moments. Throughout the story, I was a bit confused why this was in the "M" category and not the T category. Despite this, I thought that the stor, while briefly written, was well written from the beginning to end. Great job.

Best love story ever keep up the good work

Good story, I love it!

Why are they lying to her?

That was a great story :-)

this was a very cute storie

I guess Daniel Alexander skipped class on the day they were teaching medical ethics.

Loved it! And the dress! (sighs) So beautiful! I loved the way you described it too!

I have a question for this chapter, it was mentioned that Serena was waiting for the green light so she could walk. Here's my question, why was there a speeding car? Wasn't it supposed to be green light for the walk sign then the car should have red light meaning they should be stopping.

Why was she bleeding in her mouth? I do know that when she got hit badly she lost a blood, I can imagine how she looks, but kept on wondering why the blood is coming from her mouth.

I'm guessing that Darien here isn't studying to be a doctor since he seems to be clueless when the doctor said that her association cortex has been damaged.

Sorry, I wanted to know, no need to flare up and get feisty. My question might get answer in the next chapters so I'll just read on. And thank you for creating an idea of Serena not remembering Darien, I was curious myself, instead of her being saddened of their break up on R series.

AMAZING story! I just couldn't stop reading it until the very end! This story made me laugh, cry, smile, get angry, every emotion possible! I could feel everything Serena and Darien were feeling and you truly captured their love for one another. Again, amazing story. Awesome job! :)

vgj

That was a lovely story I'm jealous wish I could write so well. lol :) Hope you do more wonderful SerenaxDarien fics!

two pieces of critism i have...

1) the author notes in the middle of the story. as you stated, it is your story, you don't have to follow the original story line (as in favorites and whatnot) to a T...otherwise there would be no fanfiction.

2) the school trip isn't really realistic. though again, it is your story. but I've seen it in a few stories before and i've never been a fan. realistically there is a permission slip, packing if it's for a couple weeks. and how could you forget to tell your family? That, and she'll have to miss school (i'm guessing at least)and she will have to be called in...unless the scouts call her in i guess they could probably do with their powers to sound like her mother.

other than that, i'll be interested in seeing how the memory loss develops. i was expecting her not to remember scouts or anything like that. maybe remember who her friends are, but not the scouts.

i tend to apeal to more realistic senarios, which is why i'm not a fan of the school trip thing, but 20 feet in the air and to remember everything but the last few hours before it happened? Not sure how it'll develop. guess i'll find out!