Oh my gosh! You really pulled the rug out from under my feet. I'm speechless. This one will haunt me.

This absolutely blew me away. Amazingly done, I'm going back to read it again right now! Just woww.

Wow. Just wow. This is amazing.

wow, good, but way creepy!

The girl who recommended this on said to pay close attention, so I did. Yet I'm going to go back and read it again, because it took me until Sam said, "How long? How many times have we done this?" before I started, my eyes widened, and I said out loud, "Whoa!" and I finally got what the Hell was going on. Awesome story. Just awesome.

You're not leaving this here, surely! OMG! There's got to be more!

Very, very weird, but he's got to figure it out!

Wow, this was very intense especially after watching Mystery Spot- great job!

Woah...

Great job!

Lovely and so heartbreaking.

I keep trying to articulate how much I loved this but I never come close. AMAZING. That's it. You're a beautiful writer.

This story is very interesting. I like how you kind of are vegue with the characters. It's a very nice effect. I think that your style is much like one of the famous authors from the seventeenth century. I enjoy haveing to think in order to dig deeper into the story. Great job.

Tah

HoofsTails Gal

::shudder:: Damn! Okay, that's a perfect Halloween one, really... VERY well done, for all the dark and creepy, which I'm usually not so fond of. Bravo, yet again!

Confusing, but I got it after reading it the second time round(Im so proud). Seriously freaked me out. Scary-creepy-and-oh-so-sad. If they made this into an ep(which they so could,should, need a happier ending 'd also need to make it less subtle, for us simpletons) it would be far far creepier than anything else they could do, Bloody Mary and what they've done so far not withstanding. Does it end? The idea that it doesn't and Dean's suffering forever is really scary. Like being buried alive, only you don't die. Im still a wee bit confused though, about Sam saying 'all those people' and everything. What exactly did Dean do?

Liked the bit about Macbeth. Dean was crazy *shudders* not even fun crazy but like sociopathic. Haunting story, original and terrifying, it does the supernatural justice.

This is definitely a new story form that I haven't read before. Very creative. Bravo! You pulled off the cyclical theme very well. But the storyline is so tragic... Will you give us a sequel in which they break the cycle?

freaky. with a capital F-R-E-A-K-Y. i wondered at the ending...why dean shot sam, til i reread it and found: 'It’s not madness and it’s not sanity and he wonders how long it took for his brother to break.' wow. whatta story. i loved it. i know you said it's a one-shot, but could you make maybe a sequel? this is too good to just leave as it is! .