You really wrote an awesome story, I loved the totally different approach, it was short though but at least the story was finished. I'm going to be honest, the grammar was really bad and hard to read at times and follow, but still manage to finish the story. Loved the whole idea of the story line.

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I love your story:)

It is well written but the 'Little did she know that it was already to late' do not fit into the writing style. Please continue writing because youre good at it:)

Excellent story! One of your best so far! I really enjoyed it!

I started reading this story back in o6. You were my writing role-model. But you were only up to chapter three. It was so nice to search for this story again and find it completely finished.

WOW! You are a really great author!

O this gets better and better the more i read!

Wow this is awesome! i just cant get enough of it!

Wow wonderful. Very good... wow

aww ive been tryin to get round to reading his for ages n im reli glad i finaly have. its a reli sweet story :)

it was great I loved it.

This story is definately one of your best. RyouxIchigo 4eva!

Very unique story, with a good plotline. Sometimes you typed so fast you mixed words up or combined them, but I think most writers do that. But I'd suggest using spell check at the end. But, anyway, it was a great story, and I'm really glad I read it -gives you a cookie-

Very good story, I enjoyed it.

But be careful of your typing!

Don't worry, I do it aswell, it's very annoying.

Great story :)

...OMFG I LOVED IT...IT WAS AMAZING! I...I...IM SPEECHLESS...THIS WA AWEMAZING!_ _ _ _ _ _ _..._