i didn’t even read the story, but these comments have me wheezing. people are angry, i don’t really know why but it’s hilarious.

it is a rare (very rare) moment when the first sentence of a story leaves me incredulous and somewhat weirded out and quite simply thinking 'WTF'. you, my friend, have succeeded in that. congratulations, feel proud.

Why does itachi appear so early in the story? And why does naruto transform so early too?
Well, apart from that the story is coming along pretty well(which is actually too late for me to say)

Overall, this story is a major disappointment. I expected the best of both worlds. A mixture of AU high school with the normal ninja stuff. But this story failed to deliver that. It was as if the writer didn't plan the back stories and initial plot which therefore made the rest of the story look like it is being made up as it goes.
Then we have how each characters powers are written. Again, no planning. This is even worse. It feels like the author never watched or read "Naruto" and rather just heard about it in passing. The way some characters powers were described went way out of the real thing. And those that were within the margin were underutilized and underwhelming to read.
Examples are Ino's powers being written as psychic and Deidara's powers being written as simple bomb arrangement and not a jutsu. The story was written unrealistically in a lot of ways. I kept reading hoping the author will evolve over time and the writing will get better but a story of 5 years and 70 chapters remained as if a kid was just scribbling down thoughts.
Case in point, the author seems to know little to nothing about the world he is writing about. He lacks appreciation for each characters strengths and weaknesses. Same for the technological level of the world in question and ultimately what drives each character and their relationship with others. The authors fleeting romance between Naruto/Hinata and Naruto/Sakura was cringing to read. The author surely had no end game for this and just decided to make both sides happy by leaving the love triangle as it is. And the only thing worse than a love triangle is an unresolved one.
Overall, I am disappointed. I have set my sights on reading this story for a long time and it is underwhelming and feels like a waste of time.
I can barely think of anything good in it. But I guess the author should know this by now. When you have a story of almost 10 years and 70 chapters with the review, follow and favourites stats as it is, it just goes to show that the author did a lot of things wrong.

good

no more narusaku...its sickening. she dont deserve him and we all know it O.e

fuck you and your dumb as story! no wait im sorry i didnt mean it fuck man whyd you do it WHYYYY

well dont i feel like a dick... sakura was actually likable in this fic...

a gun... seriously a gun... LOL AND DURING SUCH A TOUCHING MOMENT... BEAUTIFUL (Hatred runs deep dont judge me!)

THEHEHEE WUAHAHAHA I CAN SEE IT BURTN TO A CRISP WITH A FIRE BALL? KUNAI THREW THE HEART? OH GENJUTSUED TO DEATH? OHHH I CANT WAIT

SHIKAMARU NOOOOOOO GOD DAMNIT TO ALL FUCKS WHY... WHY CANT IT BE SAKURA WHY?

...NOOO NOT TEN TEN YOU BASTARDS

haha yes i smell blodd wuahahaha

sooo susukes gunna kill sakura huh? lol i can smell it...

olz be dead plz be dead oh sakura plz be dead... YEA SEWR KISS THATS ONE WAY TO GET DOWN AND DIRTY LOL