Reviews for An Alternate Yule Ball
K chapter 1 . 6/28
Yes, a lot of fun.
RipBudAce chapter 5 . 2/14/2019
In chapter 5 there seems to be a lot missing. It jumps from Crouch coming out of the forest with Krum & Harry, to Harry telling Hermione that he's dead.
Harry Thomas Riddle chapter 3 . 2/9/2019
This drama was forced and ruined your story what a shame. I'll never understand why so many harmonian shippers always pull this GoF drama crap...Also, Harry was a retarded idiot for not rescuing his own girlfriend.
xDragonFire961a chapter 1 . 11/11/2018
Hmm to read or not to read
Ahh screw it reading it
Rita Abbott chapter 9 . 9/4/2018
This fic is really amazing. When you said it was lacking in quality, I though it would be like"A Kiss Can Save The World", by robst. I've also read some of your other fics and they were different. It's as if another person wrote them. Whether it's your old fics or your new ones, I'm always happy to read them. Keep up the good work.
redundantiwi chapter 1 . 11/1/2017
*sees summary* Nah, imma read that.
AmberRiver02 chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
Aww this is so sweet! :DDD
otakunerd247 chapter 9 . 7/20/2016
YESSS I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH! HARMONY FOR LIFE :D :D :D :D
kyuki619 chapter 9 . 3/21/2016
GETTING REALLY GOOD~
kyuki619 chapter 8 . 3/21/2016
HERMIONE IS REALLY IN LOVE WITH HARRY~~~~ SHE LOVES HIM~~~~ JUST ADMITTED HERMIONE, YOUR IN LOVE WITH HIM!
Sixstringsamurai83 chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
for 14, this is AMAZING, i have terrible grammar, and though i have an extensive vocabulary, people over look eloquent descriptions whenever a comma is misplaced.
You did amazing.
-Jesse-
MudbloodAndProud chapter 4 . 6/5/2015
Loved it, actually! I think you're overreacting when you say it's bad! I'm captivated, and it's hard to get me interested in something!
continental-line chapter 4 . 1/9/2014
"felt goose bumps on his arms from the cold; after all, it was only February" It seems that the majorty of FanFic writera make Scotland warmer than it is in winter. I lived and worked in Holy Loch, Scotland and the tempatures in the Highland can (And often do!) drop below freezing for several week at a time! Black Lake should have been covered by a sheet of ice. The champions and the hostiges stood a real chance of dieing of exposier. In WW II, sailiers were toled that their life expectency in North Atlantic waters during winter was TEN MINETS!

The change in Hermione's age (Making her one year younger.) is minor and should only upset the purests. Don't like this, read the books. Personaly, I like this story so far.
fanfic reader chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
amazing! i love this chapie
Gallara1991 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Perfect..just perfect :) this is exactly how I would imagine Rowling write it out if they were given a chance. Bravo
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