just wanted to say it makes me giggle that she puts on his shirt every night. And he practically falls asleep looking at her picture. For two very intelligent people, they're both so clueless! lol... but maybe that's why we love them? They make us wait for the good stuff, lol

Hahaha...I like it when people say to review. They have clever ways. Except, what does e/r/r mean? Eat, read, and review? Why would someone eat a fanfic?

It's crap! Nah, who am I kidding? It's great, like the beautiful & deadly shusken that adorns the edge of a life & death... I sound like Meathead! NO!

hiya it was well good i want t read the stepping state one if it is as good as this! i am wrighting some fics of my own and need some ideas could you please give me some? please? i would really appericiate it if you could thanx!

thanx sammy

hi i review at the end of each fic i read and also i am quite a slow typer with false nails on so it would save me time to review at the end and tell you how the hole thing is together then again i will review if it is really crappy or there is a really obvious mistake ok? you get my jist dont ya i hope ya do.

lol

funfunfunfunfun

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I know this was finished ages ago but I've only just discovered it! I've read it all in one sitting, its really well written and Daine and Numair are perfectly in character and Alanna was also ace! I'll read A Stepping State asap. As I said I know this has been completed for a while but getting reviews makes my day so I thought I'd leave you a pretty glowing one!

I love it! tee hee! Yeah, there are a couple awkward sentences, but only a couple awkward sentences in an entire *book* is something to be proud of. And I love your characterization - you've really got their voices. Daine sounds smart but not too grammatically perfect, and Numair's Numair. I liked your George and Alanna a lot too. The dynamics you've painted between the couples are very much like Sonnet's (and I love that). And now I have to go read Stepping State! *freaks out*

this is great so far...i can't wait to read your books once they come out!

whoa!

It was great!I think you do really well with the characterization, I can see them doing everything you have them doing. I'm about to start "stepping state" and I'm sure it'll be just as good as "Interlude"

Boy repellant,Hehehe. Very cute. I'm just starting to read this one, and it looks to be off to a good start!

I really really liked it. I was uber pissed when my friend closed the internet box and I had to find it all over again. It was a good prelude to RotG. It might have been a bit too romantic but eh, that's what I like best so I don't care. ] I'm off to read your other story now so tata.

PLEASE PLEASE continue i loved it and i really want some electric moment (momentous) lol to happen!

they NEED to get together, its killing me lol

thanks so much

was greas.

Claire