I love HHr fics but this story made me cry instead of smiling. The ending was not what I was wishing for.

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Okay, you've got me in a bad spot. The angst you have and are building in your story is tearing me apart. The love both feel for each other , that they can't seem to say verbally to each other cause neither thinks the other loves the other is making them miserable and is driving them apart. And now Victor Krum, who Hermione knows loves her coming into the picture to make things between Harry and Hermione worse,,,,,, I'm sorry, but I'm done.
Ron Pate

White Angel of Auralon has written a story Called "Beltane Child" that shows just how unhappy parents of twins were when they tried to just be friends, going so far as to live in different houses. Happiness did not exist for either Harry or Daphne in that story until they became a family, and Mommy and Daddy got married. I like your story but, it is starting to hurt my heart for Harry and Hermione. To me they need to be a family.
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Ron Pate
Traveler301

Don'tcha just hate hormones when they go out of balance like that. Harry has to learn to ignore them or go nuts. The next nine months are going to be pure HELL!
I of course have noticed that there has been no mention of a marriage yet, only living together as friends. I guarantee that won't work.
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Ron Pate
Traveler301

Hermione should have known after knowing Harry for all those years that his life's dream was to have a family.
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Ron Pate
Traveler301

So, Harry and Hermione knew this was a bad idea but, what the Hell! If this is the worst mistake they ever make, they'll be very lucky. So, they are going to bring a new life into the world, that means they are going experience one of life's real miracles. It may takes a while to realize it but, they will know real happiness when he or she is born, they look their child's little face and eyes and see their creation, God's creation has been gifted to them, " A Child".
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Ron Pate
Traveler301

The morning after is not always fun. even when you were sober the night before, there can be surprises. Good, quick little chapter.
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Ron Pate
Traveler301

Good start. Hermione is one of my favorites to be shipped with Harry. There are three that I like, Hermione, Daphne, Susan, and sometimes Luna but, not normally, cause her character is always too pure and innocent, and young. Really don't like Harry paired with Ginny. I think JKR is responsible for six books, she was not even noticed by Harry as anything other than Ron's little sister. Then in book seven WHAM! she winds up married to Harry and has a young son named ABUS SEVERUS, NO, I don't buy it, not even a little bit. Your story is much more believable.
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Ron Pate
Traveler301

love it

Only read the I introduction and thought why would anyone write a story about how the only way that bushy haired bitch Hermione could get harry in bed was when he was drunk is so stupid plushe would never do anything like that he has been in love with Ginny since he was 11 don't believe me read the books the movies suck at telling the true story of harry potter. So fuck you all harry/ Hermione shippers you are to stupid to understand the story

This was such a great fic! You wrote it so well! And I love how you wrote the Weasleys and the Grangers. Everyone was so supportive. AND LITTLE JAMES WAS ADORABLE! I’m so happy Hermione wanted to name him that. So cute! And the moment when Harry listened to Hermione’s stomach and thought it was “cool” I literally started tearing up. They are adorable! You did a wonderful job!

I am sorry it's a good story but you drag it out way to long isn't even funny anymore to read to the end. (i did of course) for damn sake get a child don't act on there feelings and also after a bloody month after ugh.. she can say it to ron for crying out loud.
You should have ended it with a freaking marriage or at least them talking about it ugh..

this is the problem in most fanfics she dates ron and can say stuff, but with harry it's suddenly not possible ugh what crap..

What's krum's problem (in most fanfics) the dude's dumb, delusion, a fool, a creep.
They hardly know him and here she hasn't contact or seen him for years, out of the blue saying love you and marry me holy damn..
And then his problem with harry come on really dude.. there best friends for years and how long you know them krum, he doesn't got the right to think/speak wrongs things he's the one in the wrong.
sorry need to rant nothing against you. ;)

This NEVER would have happened hermoine is a cunt that's why Harry NEVER wanted to date her go back and read and UNDERSTAND what you are reading and you'll find out just how big a cunt and a bitch she really is then you'll see that Ginny is not only the love of his life you will also see that she is the ONLY one that ever treated his right God people are stupid when they think that Harry should be with anyone but Ginny don't people understand what they are reading anymore fuck Hermione she should have died instead of Fred Ron would probably be happier with Lavender hell he would have been better off with no one but unfortunately he ended up with that cunt hope J K writes another Harry Potter book and she does die I only hope it's slow and painful... Harry and Ginny forever and to the ones that think otherwise reread the books she cared about freeing the house elves but Harry who grew up like a house elf and treaded like one she didn't do anything in Deathly Hallows to save Luna's Dad she showed Harry to the deatheaters the same people that want to kill him and she has the balls to say Harry is her best friend yeah right with friends like that who needs enemies if everyone would just see how she treated him all is these stupid stories would stop

I actually am I RonHermione shipper and stumbled apon this thinking it was HarryGinny. I was happily surprised. I loved it. Five stars.