Aaaa that was long and sweet. Well written, just right not too much. Have you considered marking the fiction" Completed "?

Has anyone told how much of a genius you are? Such incredible work jam-packed with a slice of every genre!

good fic!

I kinda like your writing style and kinda don't at the same time. There is this blase feel to your writing that's attractive when explaining bow the characters feel about each other, but it also felt like 'not enough meat' when detailing events.

The story was interesting, though. You got Sesshoumaru down perfectly. I'm still confused about Inuyasha not recognizing his own damn brother or even trying to confer with him while they lived under the sameroof.

I really like the idea of this story. I would have like to see Touga apologize top kagome and Sesshomaru.

Thanks.

This was an amazingly well done story. I loved this story

I like this, you have an impressive AU here, very well thought out, your characters seemed real and your wording and sentence flow was quite nice. You did rush the ending, but I much prefer that to an abandoned story. Thank you for writing!

Good as heck story

So, the truth came to light :)

Hehehe...Shippou is so adorable :)

There is something strange about the last sentence.

"As a taiyoukai - and a taiyoukai - [...]" S

What did you mean with that?

Anyway good that Kagome didn't notice how close he was to attacking her...

When did Sesshomaru speak the other half of the vows?

So, he bit her on her neck...I do wonder wheter that makes them mates or not. And also what mates mean to Inus...

Hehehe...wonder how she will react to him remembering :D