I really like it so far. I can't wait for an update.

This just keeps getting better. I like it a lot.

This is getting interesting. I like it.

hey kah, ive caught up with your story now. its moving along well. im curious to see how the half-cubs will do on their journey. it seems kind of odd that the pride would let two cubs on their own. i hope they can take care of themselves

good luck with writing, i know its tough

Hey there! Told ya I'd R&R(lol)! Anyway, I've read all of your chapter and wanted to say that you've done an Excellent Job with this story so far, Keep up the Great Work, okay!

Oh No, Kiara got injured badly? That's not good, Please don't make Kiara die!(Puppy dog eyes), I Hope Machozi and Darien get to Rafiki’s master, and get the remedies in time, so Kiara can heal! Anyway, Can't wait till Chapter 6 and the Upcoming Chapters are up, Keep it up! I also love the suspense in this story, I'm very anxious to read what happens next!

Anyway, I really am looking Forward to Reading & Reviewing Chapter 6 and the Upcoming Chapters! Keep up the Great Work(Thumbs Up)!

P.S. Anyway, When you have some more time, Please check out my story, "The Lion King 3: The Dark Cub," okay, and possibly R&R it. Any reviews are greatly appreciated. Anyway, Hope you enjoy and Hope to hear from you soon(I know it's late, but I'm going to say it anyway, "HAPPY NEW YEAR", it's 2007, Wo Ho!)(LOL) Anyway, Take Care

-Kovu 01 aka Derek W.

You're from the TLKFAA aren't you? It's me, King Simba_123456, remember? Nice story, by the way.

Well this is crazy, yesterday afternoon I sensed that this story had been updated so after coming home from work I checked the place to see if you had updated but it was nowhere in sight. So I went to bed and woke up this morning to find that you have updated. Crazy, I must have some wierd sixth sense or something, or maybe I just have way too much time on my hands.

Any way great chapter, I love how your words flow with your characters conversations and I love how Machozi is such a brat. Well I look forward to more soon. So keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

Yay, fast update! What the adults talk of is so very intelligent, and I like the interaction with Machozi and Darien, too!

I liked this chapter, especially with the flashbacks and how you added Simba and Nala's thoughts to it. This is getting interesting, what all with Darien and Mahozi's journey. Interesting work, update soon!

Hey Kah, Great new chapter! I have been longing to read more of your story, and I really like how Stormy was in this chapter! But anyways can wait for the next chapter!

-le gasp- sorry, lol, really weird,i cant understand, vatanni or kiara got hurt, it was really wierd, pardon my stupidity, but welcome back_

Yay! Good thing you updated, I would've had to...eat you...or something. So have we gone back to the days when you updated like 3 times a week? Cos I luff this chapter! *is still laughing at cub chub*

I sent you horrible emails? I thought I only asked twice if you were ever going to update, oh boy now I feel like an ass. Sorry.

But glad you still updated, great to read your characters again and I am glad you gave Stormy an appearance, poor Kiara though that does not sound good what happened but yay Darien's going to find help with Chozi. Can't wait to see where their journey takes them.

Again sorry for rushing you, didn't know I was being so annoying. Take your time updating and have fun writing and drawing. :)

Oh, this is beginning to get quite interesting now. Machozi isn't happy about sharing the job with Darien and vise versa.. I wonder what'll happen next. I hope they'll be able to help save Kiara... very interesting work, update soon!

yay! i loved the first story