Reviews for Eternal Love
Guest chapter 2 . 1/23
Hardly romance but okay. The granger could have done something those traits were so school level. H/hr could have eloped. Damn wuss harry is doing nothing to prevent it, and he goes to auror school?
Cihan Sahin7 chapter 13 . 11/26/2014
(Sniff) that was the best story ever I cried all night only one request can you continue they are in heaven and all their love stories by the way plz include sex :) DETAILED sex:)))
Sad chapter 13 . 10/3/2013
There are tears in my eyes! Why did you have to make it so sad?
lozzy035 chapter 13 . 10/25/2011
this story was amazing i love it you have have me review two complete stories which is amazing

never give up writting you are amazing

glad they got their happy ending
Grace chapter 10 . 5/27/2011
Okay, I thought I had a really high tolerance for really bad, excessively stupid fics as long as they featured my favorite characters, but this fic has broken the barrier on my tolerance, so I can't not leave a review, even though I didn't manage to make it to the end. Leaving aside the horrendously bad plotting and liberal use of cliches, the motivations of your characters make zero sense. Your Malfoy's blackmail attempts are pathetic, and they carry all the fearsomeness of a four-year-old threatening to knock over his brother's sandcastle if he doesn't hand over his ice-cream cone. So watching all your other characters tremble in fear of said blackmail to the point of forced marriage and Life-Threatening-Illness-OMG ... Makes them all mind-numbingly stupid, or makes the plot itself moronic - frankly I don't have the patience to figure out which. At this point, even mentioning the OOC-ness of everyone seems a bit unfair, I'd feel like I was asking a three year old to do long division. My problems with this fic have nothing to do with shipping, but it DOES make me see why H/Hr so often tends to get slapped with the Idiot label in this fandom.
MoonyandProngs chapter 13 . 12/14/2010
That was great! I could understand Hermione’s parents' reason for wanting Hermione to marry Draco. I mean, who would want to be cursed, but they should have considered Hermione’s feelings. I like that you had Harry living with his parents and I love that Cedric was his Healer! I loved how you ended it!
lightdragon chapter 13 . 7/15/2010
omg...i am tearing...its like the story of butterfly lovers in Harry potter version...love it!
cube chapter 13 . 8/4/2007
It was sad but really sweet at the end there.

This story reminds me an awful lot of the chinese tale the butterfly lovers.

Nice story!:)
CathryneIlluminescense chapter 13 . 4/14/2007
Ohg my god...This was amazing..It made me cry.

Good work like always
penspot chapter 13 . 2/23/2007
That was so beautiful! I am crying right now it was so good.
aa chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
AA hehe thats funny
me chapter 13 . 10/13/2006
oh..my..*sniff*..god

that..ACTUALLY brought TEARS to my eyes...omg they always die dont they?
cheeky splash chapter 13 . 9/8/2006
I'm beginning to think you like harry and hermione to die so they can be together happily. Its a great story though a romeo and juliet twist. Could you add a chapter showing the reactions of the Malfoys and the parents?
LUNA GURLZ chapter 13 . 9/6/2006
T_T that was so beautiful! I LOVED reading it. but do all ur stories end or begin w/ a dead Harry and Hermione?
XYZ chapter 13 . 7/1/2006
OMG, this story like your many others is just so beautifully written and realistic to the extreme. I enjoyed reading word of it. But could you at least write one H/Hr story where these two don't end up dead in the end. Don't get me wrong. I love your stories and the style which you used to make them and so enjoyable and heartwarming without making the stories disgustingly fluffy as many of the other authors tend to do. However,it still breaks my heart every time I see Harry and Hermione die.

-Zhi
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